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Reply Mon 4 Feb, 2013 03:54 am
Hi could you correct the sentence below if there's anything wrong with it:
"I thought there was just the one that eventually kills you."
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PUNKEY
 
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Reply Mon 4 Feb, 2013 08:14 am
Need context. What are you trying to say? It makes no sense.
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McTag
 
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Reply Mon 4 Feb, 2013 08:58 am
@meathook,
Sound okay to me. A tad informal.
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Mon 4 Feb, 2013 11:03 am
@meathook,
It sounds good to me.

It reads like a line of prose, of a dialog, perhaps.
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