Tue 4 Dec, 2012 09:54 pm
what would be a better way of saying...
the overall objective of the studies conducted as previously stated were used to try and solve the question which is again; does watching violence on tv cause adolescents to become more aggressive or are adolescents who are more aggressive simply more likely to enjoy violence on tv?
i already stated this once and i know i hate how "as previously stated" and "which is again" sound i know their are different phrases but i sadly just can't think of any
The objectives of the studies used were to solve the question of whether watching violence on TV causes adolescents to become more aggressive, or are more aggressive adolescents simply more likely to enjoy watching violence on TV?
You don't need to add all these extra words that just take up space and create a passive voice for your writing.