Please edit it if necessary

Don't take this the wrong way Ori, but sometimes you can be bit wordy..
If you are trying to advertise, tell people what they want to know in a friendly manner.
Try something like what I've written below.


Our long-term website plans are to have a clean design and layout, and to create an English forum, where English scholars, doctors and technicians can communicate with Chinese members directly.

One of the long-term plannings I'm not trying to be rude, but do you use a spell check? It should be plans, one-plan or goal. of our website is the setting-up/building every website is set up and built, no need to explain. of English-onlyConveys the site is for English Only, no Chinese... forums, in which native why is this important? they are many fine Italian or Russian native speakers, for example) that could outspeak the average native born English speaker. English-speaking scholars, doctors and technicians will communicate with Chinese members directly in English languageoverkill. You've already made this point.. That is whyConfucius say.. to keep awkwardlayout design clean and correctWhat does this mean? it's either completely superfluous, or an ambiguous threat that the participants must tow the line, is important.Of course it's important, you're doctors and technicians and what not. What else could it be?

Who's your targeted market Ori? If it's English speaking doctors to a Chinese site, then your first attempt says waaaaay too much and is not really on target either.
Most english speakers on a Chinese medical forum would not think "English forum" would necessarily be a discussion on language.
In fact, if you had an "English" section, I'm sure most people would expect pages written in English.
I know you spend a lot of energy learning English, but most English speakers don't think all that much about grammar or spelling. When we see the word English or an American or British flag on a site, we ASSUME the page will be in English, not a debate on the finer points punctuation.
I think we're getting to the crux of the problem. Ori, very few english speakers would wade through your sentence, and if they did, most of them would be confused and instantly know it wasn't written by an english speaker.
When you write, you have to assume the people you are writing for are at least half as smart as you. You don't have to over explain everything.
I absolutely understand what you meant, I was cleaning it up so that an English speaker would read it. My sentence means the same thing as yours, I just dropped the 'Confucius say' part..

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One of the long-term plannings I'm not trying to be rude, but do you use a spell check? It should be plans, one-plan or goal. of our website is the setting-up/building every website is set up and built, no need to explain. of English-onlyConveys the site is for English Only, no Chinese... forums, in which native why is this important? they are many fine Italian or Russian native speakers, for example) that could outspeak the average native born English speaker. English-speaking scholars, doctors and technicians will communicate with Chinese members directly in English languageoverkill. You've already made this point.. That is whyConfucius say.. to keep awkwardlayout design clean and correctWhat does this mean? it's either completely superfluous, or an ambiguous threat that the participants must tow the line, is important.Of course it's important, you're doctors and technicians and what not. What else could it be?

Our long-term website plans are to create an English forum with a clean design and layout, where English scholars, doctors and technicians can communicate with Chinese members directly.

"English scholars and doctors" sounds like you only want people from England participating, which is not, I gather, your intent". Same with "English forum". You would be better off using something like "a forum in English" or "an English-language forum" and talking about "English-speaking scholars...." to clarify. Otherwise, I, as a Yank, would misinterpret what you're suggesting.

Don't take this the wrong way Ori, but sometimes you can be bit wordy..

I'm not trying to be rude, but do you use a spell check? It should be plans, one-plan or goal.

"English scholars and doctors" sounds like you only want people from England participating, which is not, I gather, your intent".

Otherwise, I, as a Yank, would misinterpret what you're suggesting.

Sometimes you take things a little too seriously.

I realize that the Chinese are extremely polite, to their credit. It's an admirable trait. It is, however, unnecessary in this circumstance as I pointed out.

Funny, my spell check does pick this out as a speller error.. hmmm
If you think he should use plannings, by all means, tell him to use it. You should also explain that you are a champion of slang, and that by most convention, most people who speak english would not say, One of the long term plannings ever.

One - plannings may have it's place, I'm not saying it doesn't, but if he does use it, most readers will instantly know he doesn't speak english well.

I would have to say that I'm 99.999% sure that 'plannings' currently has no place in English.

the more examples the merrier.