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Modification?

 
 
Reply Thu 13 Sep, 2012 08:12 pm


"Official results were being released Monday for the legislative election, which followed a week of demonstrations and hunger strikes at Hong Kong's government offices, culminating in tens of thousands of protesters Friday night."

The modifier "for the legislative election" seems to modify "official results". But is it dangling, because it is separated from "official results" by "were being released Monday"?
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Fri 14 Sep, 2012 11:55 am
@carolgreen876,
I think it's ok Carol. For instance unofficial results might have preceded it on Sunday
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roger
 
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Reply Fri 14 Sep, 2012 12:07 pm
@carolgreen876,
I can't make "for the legislative election" work as a modifier. It doesn't modify anything.
MontereyJack
 
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Reply Fri 14 Sep, 2012 12:20 pm
It's fine where it is. It could also directly follow "Official results". Youi know you can usually say the same thing many different ways, and they'll all be okay.
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JTT
 
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Reply Sat 15 Sep, 2012 05:31 pm
@roger,
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I can't make "for the legislative election" work as a modifier. It doesn't modify anything.


I think there might be some confusion as to what a modifier is, Rog.

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MacMillan Dictionary

modifier

a word or phrase that adds to the meaning of another word or phrase by giving more information about it

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M-W online

: a word or phrase that makes specific the meaning of another word or phrase

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Quote:
Official results were being released Monday for the legislative election,


When we front the phrase in question, does it appear more modifier like?

The legislative election official results were being released Monday ...
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PUNKEY
 
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Reply Sun 16 Sep, 2012 03:41 pm
"Official results / were being released

(when) = Monday - adverb
(what kind of results) for the legislative election - adjective

"which followed a week of demonstrations and hunger . . . " explains more about the events following the election.

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