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Reply Wed 2 May, 2012 08:47 pm
(Someone in China wrote) Life is not easy, but we have to go on with life. To be alive is real life for now.

(My editing) ==>>> Life is tough, but we must go on with life. To be alive is what my life means to be, at least for now.
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JTT
 
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Reply Wed 2 May, 2012 09:39 pm
@oristarA,
If you got 25 people to convey that same idea, Ori, you'd probably get 25 different sentences.
Miss L Toad
 
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Reply Wed 2 May, 2012 10:36 pm
@oristarA,
Life isn't easy yet we get on with it. To be alive is the only life, for now.
oristarA
 
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Reply Thu 3 May, 2012 12:06 am
@JTT,
JTT wrote:

If you got 25 people to convey that same idea, Ori, you'd probably get 25 different sentences.


At least you'd give one that you think it is best in your mind, JTT.
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oristarA
 
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Reply Thu 3 May, 2012 12:06 am
@Miss L Toad,
Miss L Toad wrote:

Life isn't easy yet we get on with it. To be alive is the only life, for now.


Good one.
Thank you.
Miss L Toad
 
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Reply Thu 3 May, 2012 02:36 am
@oristarA,
Ask me another one!

is the answer

life
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