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Thu 5 Apr, 2012 11:31 pm
The inhibitory rate of the virus induced cell lesion was over 49% when drug level was above 30mg/L, 99% when drug level was 130mg/L.
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The inhibitory rate of the virus induced cell lesion was over 49% when drug level was above 30mg/L, 99% when 130mg/L.
My lords, is this really hard?
@oristarA,
Just seen this.
1. You need a hyphen: virus-induced cell lesion
2.
Quote:was over 49% when drug level was above 30mg/L, 99% when drug level was 130mg/L
I would say
was over 49% when the drug level was above 30mg/L, and was 99% when the drug level was 130mg/L.
@McTag,
McTag wrote:
Just seen this.
1. You need a hyphen: virus-induced cell lesion
2.
Quote:was over 49% when drug level was above 30mg/L, 99% when drug level was 130mg/L
I would say
was over 49% when the drug level was above 30mg/L, and was 99% when the drug level was 130mg/L.
Thank you McTag.
Too many "was" there. It seems wordy.
@oristarA,
Quote:Too many "was" there. It seems wordy.
You'll have to trust me. I won't put in any more words than I think are necessary. Style is important to me.
@oristarA,
Quote:Too many "was" there. It seems wordy.
Take the wases out, Ori, or just take out one or two. Then it won't be wordy, it'll just be ungrammatical.
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