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Sun 18 Mar, 2012 12:32 am
The research on the safety of drug X has found that the adverse reaction in central nervous system caused by drug A is significantly different to that caused by drug Y.
@oristarA,
wow, not a clue about this one~
you can try use shorter words.
@oristarA,
oristarA wrote:
The research on the safety of drug X has found that the adverse reaction in central nervous system caused by drug A is significantly different to that caused by drug Y.
Research has found that drug X and drug A produce significantly different adverse reactions in the central nervous system.
@oristarA,
I'm generally in favor of shorter sentences, but I don't see any unnecessary verbage in this example. Shorter is only better if it conveys the same meaning.
@engineer,
Alright! I should have counted to ten before posting.