@izzythepush,
izzythepush wrote:
I think you've gone off on a tangent now. What on Earth does the above passage have to do with Achilles? Or did you just want people to know you've read the Iliad?
I think judging someone's writing by one paragraph is very unreasonable.
There is an old saying the exact of and author of I would like to find: That sooner or later, every hero becomes a bore... I would say that sooner than later, every person who is the hero of his own tale is bound and determined to be a bore, and in the sense of Autobiography, what ever part the Author plays in the story he is presenting, he is revealing himself to be a whiney tit, and incapable of achieving Valhalla... Do you think Veni, Vidi, Vici could ever come out of his face??? They say every man loves the smell of his own farts, but you refuse to judge the sound for fear is will not be music... The thing that makes so much of poetry impossible and boring is that people put the drama of their own introspection front and center... It is inevitable that we should reveal ourselves in the characters and events we give our attention to... A little of us is shown if we recognize that one can walk by an injured person in the street, and another cannot without giving aid, but no person conceals so much of their character as when he or she tells all... Drama; fiction, poetry should be about something and some one, and it is the author playing second fiddle that gets to first place... I know that when I write it is all about me, but as Jefferson said: I am already tired of talking about myself... So is everybody else... If you are telling a story, then tell a story... Some one is going to get shot before the thing is over... Just make sure it is not you, and if you done it, then start at page one on the apology... Some people deserve death, and some people dare it for a very good reason... I'd rate bad authors with the former and not the latter...
I'd say: If you want to be introspective, then see a shrink... Do you think Hemingway could paint a character as introspective, or that he would bother??? He had a story to tell...What makes him a good writer is that he was there, but not obviously, and he never tried to send anyone running for a dictionary... No one should need another book to read a book...
Seriously; to spill ones guts to a therapist is a great saving of money and resources... Anyone who does not write for money is a block head; said Johnson, but there are plenty of blockheads who will spend enough money on self absorbed rubbish to keep almost any writer in a state of near starvation...When I think, I have known two people who have killed themselves, one with a lot of promise, and the other without possibility, and that the effort to save the last one cost me my trade and career and income, then I know I do not have to look at myself to tell a tale... And stories are boundless, drama is everywhere; but it is heroes who are in short supply... We have a limited supply of heroes as types, but examples of ignomy are as common as dirt...