Not bad, OristarA! Just a few little things...
Quote:British Scientists Say X-ray and CT May Cause Cancer
and suggest using them carefully
Researchers in the UK indicated in a report that X-ray and CT (computerized tomography) used in hospitals may be the cause of suffering cancer for some patients. The researchers suggested that doctors should weigh the advantages and disadvantages when it is needed to use before using X-ray and CT to help diagnosis.
Medical X-ray and CT examinations have been popularly used in hospitals to help diagnose early cancer and split in broken bones. But the radiations of from the two can penetrate cells, and destroy DNA, even induce some cancer cells in human body. Scientists in at Oxford University and British Cancer Research Centre discovered, after analyzing the statistic datas from 15 countries, that 0.6% of cancer cases checked out discovered yearly in the UK are caused by X-ray. While In Japan, there are up to 3.2% of new cancer cases every year can be traced to this cause, since X-ray and CT are more popularly used in this country.
The researchers pointed out, in the report, that 30% of all X-ray examinations are unnecessary at present. They suggested that, in some circumstances, doctors might use other means to help diagnose instead of using X-ray and CT examinations.
Delete red, add blue, move green from one place in the sentence to another... this is the result:
British Scientists Say X-ray and CT May Cause Cancer
and suggest using them carefully
Researchers in the UK indicated in a report that X-ray and CT (computerized tomography) used in hospitals may be the cause of cancer for some patients. The researchers suggested that doctors should weigh the advantages and disadvantages before using X-ray and CT to help diagnosis.
X-ray and CT examinations have been popularly used in hospitals to help diagnose early cancer andbroken bones. But radiation from the two can penetrate cells and destroy DNA, even induce some cancer cells in the human body. Scientists at Oxford University and British Cancer Research Centre discovered, after analyzing the statistic data from 15 countries, that 0.6% of cancer cases discovered yearly in the UK are caused by X-ray. In Japan, up to 3.2% of new cancer cases every year can be traced to this cause, since X-ray and CT are more popularly used in this country.
The researchers pointed out that 30% of all X-ray examinations are unnecessary. They suggested that, in some circumstances, doctors might use other means to help diagnose instead of using X-ray and CT examinations.
A lot of what I changed is idomatic... that is, your dictionaries may tell you that a usage is correct, but the words just aren't used that way in English. I deleted a couple of words because they seemed repetitive or unneeded... "suffering" cancer, "medical" X-rays, "in the report" (the whole article is about what's in the report).
Even a hairline fracture (a tiny "split") is considered a broken bone. And data is already plural, you never add an "s"... the singular is datum, and it's used that way in scientific or formal papers, but hardly ever in everyday communication.
I think you did a very good job with this one. Your English skills are improving all the time!