Hi Ceili, Thanks for revising.
(1) Adding "needs" to the title is acceptable, actually making it clearer.
(2) Not I met the girl, it was the girl came to the newspaper office in which the reporter works.
(3) Regarding the expression of "the capital of China's south-central, Sichuan Province"
I've seen an example in AHD:
Sichuan: A province of south-central China.
(From The Associated Press):
Guangzhou, the capital of China's southern province of Guangdong
And many English writers used to the style like AHD's.
So the original one and the rewriting are all nice.
(4)Regarding (I would skip the part about the 'deadly disease', it might not be a good selling feature.)
LOL Ceili, that is definitely a good point!
(5)"The man hired must be honest, handsome and graceful. possibilities for further contact will be made upon conclusion of arrangement."
Nice! But "somewhat" should be added to modify "handsome", or the girl is too nitpicking to get enough responses from gentlemen (and her original idea is just "somewhat handsome").