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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Rod3
 
  1  
Fri 21 May, 2004 12:39 pm
Ah, the price of youth
Knees have gone, back's gone, grey hair
Young folk offer their seat Very Happy
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 21 May, 2004 01:00 pm
Young folk offer seats
to the doddering old folk;
a show of respect.
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 06:30 am
A show of respect:
The reckless acrobats flash,
Then apologise

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cavfancier
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 06:42 am
Then apologize
already you reckless feck
for ruining my life
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 06:47 am
For ruining my life
You can take the blame, squarely.
So get out of here!
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cavfancier
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 06:49 am
So get out of here!
I'm not fond of Mormons.
I won't buy your book.
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cavfancier
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 06:51 am
Erm, just to interject, all the haiku fans should pop in here:

http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=24856
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Equus
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 09:42 am
I won't buy your book
...I'll steal it from library
Much cheaper that way
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 10:15 am
much cheaper that way -
to take rather than to give
but then what is learned?
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 11:17 am
But then what is learnt
Within a modern school's walls:
Literature or life?


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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 11:34 am
Literature or life?
Does one mirror the other?
Did not life come first?
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Equus
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 01:18 pm
"Did not life come first?"
The chicken queried the egg.
"No, you silly cluck."
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 01:28 pm
No, you silly cluck!
Animals cannot sell you
Maps of Uruguay.



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Equus
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 01:37 pm
Maps of Uruguay
Include Montevideo
But not Sao Paulo
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 02:21 pm
...But not Sao Paolo!
The statute is not up yet.
I can go elseware.
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 03:05 pm
I can go elsewhere;
I can go down and out in
Paris and London.


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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 22 May, 2004 03:15 pm
Paris and London,
Milan, Tokyo, Belize
Ah, to travel these.
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Equus
 
  1  
Sun 23 May, 2004 01:06 pm
Ah, to travel these.
Ready to visit the World!
Where is my ticket?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sun 23 May, 2004 03:54 pm
Where is my ticket?
I know I have it somewhere!
These darn large purses!
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 23 May, 2004 03:58 pm
Those darn large purses,
filled with hard-edged pointy things,
hurt my knees daily.
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