you are still getting the rhythm wrong for this haiku game
do you want to try fixing any of these?
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ehBeth
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Mon 11 Jan, 2016 09:33 pm
@ehBeth,
for oristarA's reference
Monger wrote:
Here's how it goes. . .the first line of the next person's haiku must be the same as the last line of the previous person's haiku. (My definition of haiku being just the 5-7-5 thing, not the complicated Japanese naturey thing.)
This could be good fun (5 syllables)
More than being swallowed by (7 syllables)
A crazy rabbit (5 syllables)
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ehBeth
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Mon 11 Jan, 2016 09:34 pm
@oristarA,
oristarA wrote:
peeling three boiled eggs,
eating them as humble pies,
and self soothing: never mind
you've done this one as 5/7/7 instead of 5/7/5
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ehBeth
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Mon 11 Jan, 2016 09:38 pm
@firefly,
and create great food
from the ingredients here
would be a true gift
For car or diamonds
I no longer give a hoot,
but friends matter much.
I never did care about diamonds but did like looking at rubies and emeralds in jewelry store windows. Jewels have costs in pain to the people who are 'employed' gathering them, and so probably do silver and I'm sure re gold.
Of them all, I like silver. That took me a while.
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vonny
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Thu 14 Jan, 2016 02:35 pm
@chai2,
Oh! Retirement
Busier now than ever
Rest? Surely a joke!
