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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
ehBeth
 
  2  
Mon 4 Jan, 2016 11:57 pm
@Monger,
Monger wrote:

Here's how it goes. . .the first line of the next person's haiku must be the same as the last line of the previous person's haiku. (My definition of haiku being just the 5-7-5 thing, not the complicated Japanese naturey thing.)

This could be good fun
More than being swallowed by
A crazy rabbit

ekename
 
  1  
Wed 6 Jan, 2016 01:15 am
@ehBeth,
Whisper then depart
For sweeting is part sorrow
Then love springs anew.
vonny
 
  1  
Wed 6 Jan, 2016 03:02 pm
@ekename,
Then love springs anew
what light through yonder window
shines sweeting sorrow
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oristarA
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jan, 2016 05:11 am
@oristarA,
oristarA wrote:

Who tells him to work harder
For frost is only a test
Work on till peace rules the land



Work on till peace rules the land
the righteous will flourish
prosperity will abound
oristarA
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jan, 2016 05:24 am
@oristarA,
prosperity will abound
and love takes wing
to the shining cloud
oristarA
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jan, 2016 05:46 am
@oristarA,
to the shining cloud
with great joy
life's meaning is thus fulfilled
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edgarblythe
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jan, 2016 05:49 am
To the shining cloud
came a darkening cold shroud
and the rain fell down
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jan, 2016 02:05 pm
@edgarblythe,
and the rain fell down
on Californian lawns
ending drought this year.

ehBeth
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jan, 2016 02:16 pm
@tsarstepan,
ending drought this year
her music gave our hearts new
reasons to listen
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jan, 2016 02:19 pm
@ehBeth,
^^^

Seeing Monger's post reminds me that I still miss him, lo these many years.


Reasons to listen
are both many and few; it
depends on who talks.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jan, 2016 02:27 pm
@ossobuco,
Depends on who talks,
the other will be focused
on her shiny phone.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jan, 2016 02:30 pm
@tsarstepan,
On her shiny phone
she put lipstick kisses since
she loves it so much.
oristarA
 
  1  
Fri 8 Jan, 2016 12:21 am
@ossobuco,
she loves it so much
and nudges ossobuco:
"Honey, will I be your sweetie?"
vonny
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jan, 2016 02:11 pm
@oristarA,
"Honey, will I be"
sweet nothings in her ear, a
question she awaits?
firefly
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jan, 2016 02:29 pm
@vonny,
Question she awaits,
A proposal of marriage,
Is never offered
vonny
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jan, 2016 02:41 pm
@firefly,
Is never offered
not once, not ever, but then
sadly, she sighs - men!
cicerone imposter
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jan, 2016 02:46 pm
@vonny,
The petter patter of rain
on our roof with solar panels
isn't so loud in our home
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jan, 2016 03:31 pm
@cicerone imposter,
CI, in this thread the first line of the haiku is the last line of the person posting before you.
We also count syllables - the first line gets 5, the second line gets 7, and the last line gets 5.
cicerone imposter
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jan, 2016 03:32 pm
@ossobuco,
Sorry, can't delete.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jan, 2016 05:07 pm
@ossobuco,
It's ok, many people have missed "the rules". Once you get used to the mode it can be quite fun to play with.
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