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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 01:08 pm
I am outta here!
See you next eternity
In deep outer space!
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 01:33 pm
In deep outer space
no one can hear you screaming
Or see you smiling
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 01:36 pm
Or see you smiling
Behind that vast feathered fan
That covers your face.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 01:45 pm
That covers your face,
that bhurka they make you wear.
Come out, Afghan- girl!
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fealola
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 02:45 pm
Come out, Afghan- girl!
We're waiting for you to bloom!
Hide away no more.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 02:52 pm
Hide away no more.
The game has been done for hours!
Oh, where have you gone?!


(a semi-autobiographical haiku!!)
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kirsten
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 03:12 pm
Oh, where have you gone?
The innocence of childhood
I would retreat there
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 03:14 pm
I would retreat there,
To the old grey monastery
Behind the white clouds
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 03:17 pm
Behind the white clouds
the sun still shines for us all,
a silver lining.
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 03:22 pm
A silver lining
To the red velvet cloak which
Dracula then wore.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 03:44 pm
Oooooooooh!

Dracula then wore
an evil smile on his face
closing in to kill
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patiodog
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 04:44 pm
Closing in to kill --
An embrace more lethal than
New Jersey water
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 05:00 pm
tee-hee!

New Jersey water,
that icky smelly stuff, ew!
Don't give me any!
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 05:17 pm
Don't give me any.
I don't want any of your
prissy attitude.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 05:34 pm
Ooh, ouch! Don't mess with Beth!

Prissy attitude
is not becoming on you,
you, little boy-man!
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patiodog
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 07:14 pm
You, little boy!
Sing me of that mannish boy --
Warren Zevon's gone.
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fealola
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 07:27 pm
Warren Zevon's gone
Not even in a plane crash
The day music died.
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Equus
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 07:50 pm
The day music died
They invented "rap music"
Music R.I.P.
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patiodog
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 09:09 pm
Music R.I.P
Invented rap / invent / in
I sample Equus
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fealola
 
  1  
Wed 12 May, 2004 10:14 pm
I sample Equus.
That's technolishious, baby
Rave on, rave on. Yeah.
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