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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
ossobuco
 
  1  
Wed 23 Feb, 2011 10:42 am
@firefly,
In a perfect sea,
there would be no pirates to
wreck the sailing bliss.
0 Replies
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 23 Feb, 2011 02:04 pm
@firefly,
In a perfect sea.
Dark clouds gather in the wind,
a storm is coming.
firefly
 
  1  
Thu 24 Feb, 2011 10:00 am
@Dutchy,
I think I'll reply to both Dutchy and osso...

A storm is coming
And will wreck the sailing bliss,
Shall we head for shore?
Francis
 
  2  
Thu 24 Feb, 2011 10:23 am
@firefly,
Shall we head for shore?
Iseult asked with her soft voice
Filled with sadness..
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 24 Feb, 2011 02:57 pm
@Francis,
Filled with sadness,
Constantly looking for hope,
nowhere to be found
.
hamburgboy
 
  1  
Thu 24 Feb, 2011 05:01 pm
@Dutchy,
nowhere to be found
still never give up your hopes
wait for the sunrise

  http://www.vanmusic.ca/yourmusicscene/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/fridaysunrise.jpg
ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 24 Feb, 2011 05:19 pm
@hamburgboy,
wooh! beautiful photo, hbg.

Wait for the sunrise!
Gloom shall not be quite as dire
with onset of the morn.
hamburgboy
 
  1  
Thu 24 Feb, 2011 05:22 pm
@ossobuco,
with onset of morn'
the birds will rise from the trees
and a new day starts

  http://www.glimpsesofnature.in/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/02/forest-bird-1.jpg
firefly
 
  1  
Fri 25 Feb, 2011 03:43 pm
@hamburgboy,
And a new day starts--
Some coffee to wake me up,
Then I'm good to go


hamburgboy
 
  1  
Fri 25 Feb, 2011 03:48 pm
@firefly,
then i'm good to go
to shovel the lovely snow
to build a snowman

   http://snowfall.gareau.org/wp-content/uploads/2009/12/Snowman.JPG
firefly
 
  2  
Fri 25 Feb, 2011 03:56 pm
@hamburgboy,
To build a snowman,
And go sledding down a hill--
A child's winter joy

spendius
 
  1  
Fri 25 Feb, 2011 04:15 pm
@hamburgboy,
and a new day starts
at half past ten in the pub
with Charlotte on't pumps.
0 Replies
 
spendius
 
  2  
Fri 25 Feb, 2011 04:18 pm
@firefly,
Sorry about that

A child's winter joy
Is Mummie warmed pygamas
And a good night kiss
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 25 Feb, 2011 09:01 pm
@spendius,
And a good night kiss.
I've wanted this for so long,
her tender embrace.
ragnel
 
  2  
Fri 25 Feb, 2011 09:44 pm
@Dutchy,
Her tender embrace
That he has been yearning for
Is for another.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 25 Feb, 2011 09:58 pm
@ragnel,
Is for another.
The sad story of my life,
when will this ever change?
firefly
 
  1  
Sat 26 Feb, 2011 12:43 pm
@Dutchy,
When will this ever change?
I'm tired of cold and snow,
I need daffodils
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 26 Feb, 2011 12:46 pm
@firefly,
I need daffodils!
Daffy dondillies so dear
drift across the hill.
existential potential
 
  2  
Sat 26 Feb, 2011 01:11 pm
@ossobuco,
Drift across the hill
the fog of the cold morning
our walk is hurried.
firefly
 
  2  
Sat 26 Feb, 2011 01:48 pm
@existential potential,
Our walk is hurried,
Our breath mists in the chill air,
The cold invades us
 

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