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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
hamburgboy
 
  1  
Sun 5 Sep, 2010 03:03 pm
@Dutchy,
you've been on my mind
did i ever tell you ?
over all this long long time
Diane
 
  2  
Sun 5 Sep, 2010 03:15 pm
@hamburgboy,
over all this long long time
My beautiful young daughter
I've seen your loveliness grow.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 5 Sep, 2010 05:34 pm
@Diane,
I've seen your loveliness grow.
You are a teenager now,
ready for the world.
Diane
 
  2  
Sun 5 Sep, 2010 05:56 pm
@Dutchy,
Ready for the world
but not for drivers license
Oh how I shudder
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Sun 5 Sep, 2010 05:59 pm
@Diane,
Oh how I shudder
from the thought that my bedroom
is a bed bug's den.
Diane
 
  1  
Sun 5 Sep, 2010 06:47 pm
@tsarstepan,
Is a bed bug's den
contained in tsarstepan's room
oh lord above NO!!
0 Replies
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 5 Sep, 2010 06:52 pm
@tsarstepan,
is a bed bug's den.
My dignity is missing,
where did my pants go?
Diane
 
  2  
Sun 5 Sep, 2010 11:17 pm
@Dutchy,
Where did my pants go?
Oh now I remember, sigh
I've gained too much weight.

Sad
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 6 Sep, 2010 12:42 am
@Diane,
I've gained too much weight.
Eat lot of vegetables,
the way to thinness.
ragnel
 
  2  
Mon 6 Sep, 2010 12:48 am
@Dutchy,
The way to thinness
Is the road I once followed
Now I just live life.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 6 Sep, 2010 01:27 am
@ragnel,
Now I just live life.
Flowing with all existence
grows the one we are.
Diane
 
  2  
Wed 8 Sep, 2010 11:11 pm
@Dutchy,
Grows the one we are

A tribe is best for learning

All different ages
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Wed 8 Sep, 2010 11:14 pm
@Diane,
All different ages
depend on the night for sleep
except the wild young.
Diane
 
  2  
Wed 8 Sep, 2010 11:20 pm
@tsarstepan,
Wild children we were
Now Fights AIDS in Africa
Not wild, but loving
Dutchy
 
  2  
Fri 10 Sep, 2010 08:08 pm
@Diane,
Not wild, but loving.
Heading for relationship,
love will find a way.
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Fri 10 Sep, 2010 08:28 pm
@Dutchy,
Love will find a way
by driving recklessly west on
the eastbound highway.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 10 Sep, 2010 08:54 pm
@tsarstepan,
The eastbound highway.
Using a criminal’s brain,
what did you expect?
ragnel
 
  1  
Sat 11 Sep, 2010 05:01 pm
@Dutchy,
What do you expect
Me to say now that you're here?
Roll out the barrel?
Diane
 
  2  
Sat 11 Sep, 2010 10:04 pm
@ragnel,
Roll out the barrel?'

Is that all you have to say?

Well, for pity's sake!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 11 Sep, 2010 10:57 pm
@Diane,
Well for pity'sake!
Take off your habit forthwith
and join the party!
 

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