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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 3 Aug, 2010 12:53 am
@ragnel,
Blew out the candles.
Hiding unwanted visions,
the sun is sleeping.
Victor Eremita
 
  1  
Sat 21 Aug, 2010 07:16 pm
@Dutchy,
The sun is sleeping
The moon is hyperactive
The Earth nuked itself
ragnel
 
  2  
Sat 21 Aug, 2010 07:55 pm
@Victor Eremita,
The earth nuked itself
But will rise from the ashes
Just like the phoenix
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 22 Aug, 2010 04:09 am
@ragnel,
Just like the Phoenix.
Fire is warm and burns with life,
until it is quenched.
0 Replies
 
ossobuco
 
  2  
Sun 22 Aug, 2010 11:25 am
Until it is quenched
thirst raves so insistently
that the throat parches
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 22 Aug, 2010 06:36 pm
@ossobuco,
that the throat parches
I like it too, and you're a
glass ahead of me.
firefly
 
  1  
Wed 25 Aug, 2010 02:10 pm
@Dutchy,
Glass ahead of me
Was quite difficult to see
I hit that door hard
spendius
 
  1  
Wed 25 Aug, 2010 03:07 pm
@firefly,
I hit that door hard
When she wouldn't let me in.
She was just testing.
firefly
 
  2  
Wed 25 Aug, 2010 03:49 pm
@spendius,
She was just testing
The cheesecake in the oven
It seems to be done
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 25 Aug, 2010 06:00 pm
@firefly,
It seems to be done.
She left me in a hurry,
Never to return.
firefly
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2010 01:51 am
@Dutchy,
Never to return
Is this perfect summer day
Live in the moment
ehBeth
 
  1  
Wed 1 Sep, 2010 08:23 pm
@firefly,
Live in the moment,
enjoy the human parade
as it rumbas past.
0 Replies
 
Mame
 
  2  
Wed 1 Sep, 2010 08:25 pm
As it rumbas past
Don't let go of the moment
It only comes once
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 2 Sep, 2010 01:06 am
@Mame,
It only comes once.
Famous last words, you think you're
coming and you're gone.
Mame
 
  2  
Thu 2 Sep, 2010 03:58 pm
@Dutchy,
Coming and you're gone
Sure, isn't that what they all do?
I'm disillusioned.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 2 Sep, 2010 10:53 pm
@Mame,
I'm disillusioned.
May not want to be chosen,
to love someone new.
Mame
 
  1  
Fri 3 Sep, 2010 08:20 am
@Dutchy,
to love someone new
is oft a wondrous event
that one should savour
Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 3 Sep, 2010 08:52 am
@Mame,
that one should savour
the sweet joy of parenthood
is a gift from God
Diane
 
  2  
Sat 4 Sep, 2010 05:59 am
@Intrepid,
Is a gift from god
knowable and understood
or yet a secret?
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 4 Sep, 2010 08:47 pm
@Diane,
or yet a secret?
It’s not easy to forget,
you’ve been on my mind.
 

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