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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 22 Apr, 2010 05:50 pm
@ossobuco,
At dandelions.
In the botanic garden,
oh so beautiful.
existential potential
 
  2  
Fri 23 Apr, 2010 04:43 am
@Dutchy,
Oh so beautiful
in the early morning sunshine
the still butterfly
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 23 Apr, 2010 06:01 am
@existential potential,
the still butterfly
fluttering from bloom to bloom,
drift, flit, glide to me.
firefly
 
  2  
Sat 24 Apr, 2010 09:49 am
@Dutchy,
Drift, flit, glide to me
You magnificent Monarch,
Most regal butterfly
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Sat 24 Apr, 2010 11:38 am
@firefly,
Most regal butterfly?
Go forth and exclaim the news.
Soon a milestone reached....
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 25 Apr, 2010 12:04 am
@tsarstepan,
Soon a milsestone is reached...
The conical mountain reigns,
the summit beckons .
ragnel
 
  2  
Sun 25 Apr, 2010 03:58 am
@Dutchy,
The summit beckons -
I have striven to reach it.
Feet, do not stop now!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 25 Apr, 2010 04:31 am
@ragnel,
Feet, do not stop now.
Keep on walking young lady,
you'll look terrific.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Sun 25 Apr, 2010 10:18 am
@Dutchy,
You'll look terrific,
I bet, by now; time's boon friend.
He's no friend to me.
firefly
 
  3  
Sun 25 Apr, 2010 08:03 pm
@iamsam82,
He's no friend to me,
That rat brought me a cheesecake,
And I'm dieting
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 25 Apr, 2010 08:17 pm
@firefly,
And Im dieting.
Fleeting, I dash in and out,
my dinner a is ready.
ragnel
 
  2  
Sun 25 Apr, 2010 09:41 pm
@Dutchy,
My dinner is ready,
So much effort has been made.
I am not hungry.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 25 Apr, 2010 11:19 pm
@ragnel,
I am not hungry.
Chef will be disappointed,
kitchen is a hot place.
spendius
 
  1  
Mon 26 Apr, 2010 11:01 am
@Dutchy,
Kitchen is a hot place,
When pots and pans are rattling
And stray locks are blown.
firefly
 
  1  
Mon 26 Apr, 2010 12:08 pm
@spendius,
And stray locks are blown
Covering faces like veils,
The art of the wind
iamsam82
 
  1  
Mon 26 Apr, 2010 03:52 pm
@firefly,
The art of the wind
Is best seen in stirring dust.
Show your strength humbly.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Mon 26 Apr, 2010 07:31 pm
@iamsam82,
Show your strength humbly
lest you be thought bumbly, or
calm. That could happen.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 26 Apr, 2010 10:19 pm
@ossobuco,
calm. That could happen.
To feel so fresh this morning,
is a great delight.
ragnel
 
  2  
Tue 27 Apr, 2010 02:13 am
@Dutchy,
Is a great delight
Something to be expected,
Or just a surprise?
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 27 Apr, 2010 04:09 am
@ragnel,
Or just a surprise?
So surprised to see blue skies,
slowly fade to night.
 

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