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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Rockhead
 
  0  
Sat 17 Apr, 2010 10:42 pm
@Dutchy,
you are not the man
she said with far away eyes
and then disappeared
firefly
 
  2  
Sun 18 Apr, 2010 08:29 pm
@Rockhead,
And then disappeared
Into the thick London fog,
And eternity

tsarstepan
 
  1  
Sun 18 Apr, 2010 08:47 pm
@firefly,
An eternity
passed since the moon kissed the sun.
The sun forgets not.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Sun 18 Apr, 2010 09:31 pm
@tsarstepan,
the sun forgets not
but the moon wanders away
new words will have sway
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 18 Apr, 2010 10:44 pm
@ossobuco,
New words will have sway.
Hanging by the very edge,
swaying timidly.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 18 Apr, 2010 10:57 pm
@Dutchy,
swaying timidly
bamboo poles moved with the breeze
leaves floated down at rest.

existential potential
 
  1  
Mon 19 Apr, 2010 08:51 am
@ossobuco,
Leaves floated down at rest
meeting early morning dew
the field was misty
firefly
 
  2  
Mon 19 Apr, 2010 11:49 am
@existential potential,
The field was misty
As the pitcher launched the ball,
The game had begun
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 19 Apr, 2010 07:11 pm
@firefly,
The game had begun.
Everyone is asleep now,
thinking is so hard.
firefly
 
  1  
Mon 19 Apr, 2010 10:26 pm
@Dutchy,
Thinking is so hard
When things happen too quickly
No time to focus
ragnel
 
  2  
Wed 21 Apr, 2010 10:25 pm
@firefly,
No time to focus.
The robber is on the run.
Just take the picture!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 21 Apr, 2010 10:37 pm
@ragnel,
Just take the picture.
She is a redhead, very
beautiful in looks.
Rockhead
 
  0  
Wed 21 Apr, 2010 10:46 pm
@Dutchy,
beautiful in looks
and yet, oh so dangerous.
calling out your name
ragnel
 
  1  
Thu 22 Apr, 2010 02:07 am
@Rockhead,
Calling out your name
I sought you everywhere
But you had left me.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 22 Apr, 2010 02:24 am
@ragnel,
But you had left me.
Now I am sad and sorry,
please come back to me.
ragnel
 
  2  
Thu 22 Apr, 2010 02:29 am
@Dutchy,
Please come back to me
When you cease your wandering
I will wait for you.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 22 Apr, 2010 03:06 am
@ragnel,
I will wait for you.
Come rain, hail or shine tonight.
the future looks bright.

firefly
 
  2  
Thu 22 Apr, 2010 09:31 am
@Dutchy,
The future looks bright
I just won the lottery,
My dreams have come true
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 22 Apr, 2010 05:08 pm
@firefly,
My dreams have come true.
I can now eat what I like,
and feel not guilty.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Thu 22 Apr, 2010 05:41 pm
@Dutchy,
and feel not guilty
for taking some time to look
at dandelions
 

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