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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 5 Nov, 2009 04:10 pm
@Dutchy,
The table is set.
The candles are lit, and the
red wine is breathing...
Dutchy
 
  2  
Thu 5 Nov, 2009 04:54 pm
@ossobuco,
wine is breathing.....
dinner, two old friends become
lovers entangled.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Tue 10 Nov, 2009 01:46 am
@Dutchy,
Lovers entangled
creeping Boston ivy clings
to the old world school
oolongteasup
 
  3  
Tue 10 Nov, 2009 02:54 am
@tsarstepan,
to the old world school

ties bind like czars and cronies

stepping on new thought
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 10 Nov, 2009 05:45 am
@oolongteasup,
stepping on new thought.
Like cherry blossoms in Spring,
So pure and radiant,



iamsam82
 
  1  
Thu 12 Nov, 2009 01:53 pm
@Dutchy,
So pure and radiant -
A gaze alone would sully -
Sully it, blind you.
ehBeth
 
  2  
Sat 14 Nov, 2009 08:46 am
@iamsam82,
Sully it, blind you
with things you'd rather not see.
Frightening, dark scenes.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 14 Nov, 2009 03:45 pm
@ehBeth,
Frightening, dark scenes.
Yeah the Ghost with new vocals,
smooth, sexy. succeed.
iamsam82
 
  2  
Sat 21 Nov, 2009 03:22 am
@Dutchy,
Smooth, sexy. Succeed.
Suck seed from Fate's fat phallus
To gain his favour.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Sat 21 Nov, 2009 03:39 pm
@iamsam82,
To gain his favor
is to threaten his patience.
Time retains no one.
ossobuco
 
  3  
Sat 21 Nov, 2009 03:43 pm
@tsarstepan,
Time retains no one,
it drops us all with the wink
and blink of an eye.
Dutchy
 
  2  
Sat 21 Nov, 2009 06:29 pm
@ossobuco,
and blink of an eye.
Blue, pulling me in deeper,
your eyes mesmerize.
solipsister
 
  2  
Sat 21 Nov, 2009 11:20 pm
@Dutchy,
your eyes mesmerize

spinning counters whizzing back

along hot centre
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Sat 21 Nov, 2009 11:31 pm
@solipsister,
Along hot centre
the ethereal strings reign in
the subjugated
iamsam82
 
  3  
Thu 26 Nov, 2009 04:09 pm
@tsarstepan,
The subjugated
Lives truncated, trudging mud
On Monday mornings.
tsarstepan
 
  3  
Thu 26 Nov, 2009 04:44 pm
@iamsam82,
On Monday mornings,
suburban zombies steal out
while songbirds witness.
Dutchy
 
  2  
Thu 26 Nov, 2009 05:04 pm
@tsarstepan,
while songbirds witness.
I blow gently from the path,
come back to be squashed.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 26 Nov, 2009 05:08 pm
@Dutchy,
"Come back to be squashed!,"
howls the disgruntled victim
to the fleeing wasp.
ossobuco
 
  3  
Thu 26 Nov, 2009 07:29 pm
@tsarstepan,
To the fleeing wasp,
"begone" he says," do
choose to nest elsewhere".
Dutchy
 
  2  
Fri 27 Nov, 2009 02:47 am
@ossobuco,
choose to nest elsewhere.
said the bird to roaming cat,
you're getting to close.
 

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