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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
oolongteasup
 
  1  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:28 pm
@farmerman,
in the melting snow
times darkling sojourn touches
the kernels vector
0 Replies
 
ossobuco
 
  2  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:37 pm
the kernels vector?
the kernals slump quiet
Free the kernels, rage.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:44 pm
@ossobuco,
Messed that up, oh, well.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:51 pm
@ossobuco,
It does have a lovely stream of conscious feel to it. Still a poem, albeit a slightly confusing and nonHaiku poem, but a poem anyway. Wink
ossobuco
 
  2  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:55 pm
@tsarstepan,
kernals and colonels... how to describe that
ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:02 pm
@ossobuco,
I suppose I'm sorry if I wander off. I don't mind if straighter minds skip my posts. But... I'm often interested in the delving of others besides myself. I'm remarkably ordinary, but
wonder a lot.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:03 pm
@ossobuco,
Oops, I'm out of form.

Carry on.
0 Replies
 
Dutchy
 
  2  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:11 pm
@ossobuco,
You're doing fine ossobuco Wink

Free the kernels, rage.
I cast my bleeding dagger
from the dew of rue.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:19 pm
@Dutchy,
From the dew of rue
the weeping willow tree mourns
the fall's first harsh frost
0 Replies
 
ossobuco
 
  2  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:37 pm
the fall's first harsh frost
depends on altitude/wait,
wait for flakes and iceland.
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Tue 27 Oct, 2009 10:57 pm
@ossobuco,
Wait for flakes and Iceland.
Be fairly warned that Loki
can wait til sunrise.
Dutchy
 
  2  
Wed 28 Oct, 2009 05:23 am
@tsarstepan,
Can wait til sunrise.
All day long wearing a hat,
that wasn't on my head.
Intrepid
 
  3  
Wed 28 Oct, 2009 05:28 pm
@Dutchy,
that wasn't on my head
when I got up this morning.
How did I get hair?
Dutchy
 
  2  
Thu 29 Oct, 2009 02:31 am
@Intrepid,
How did I get hair?
Brown velvet hair of marvel,
Shining in the sun.
farmerman
 
  2  
Thu 29 Oct, 2009 04:43 am
@Dutchy,
Shining in the sun
Puddles look like plate mirrors
On the road to town.
spendius
 
  1  
Thu 29 Oct, 2009 05:33 am
@farmerman,
On the road to town
A rusty boat in a field
A sign "straw for sale".
0 Replies
 
McTag
 
  2  
Thu 29 Oct, 2009 05:33 am
@farmerman,
On the road to town
I man a man who told me
Beans are cheap today
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 29 Oct, 2009 07:13 am
@McTag,
Beans are cheap today.
The east bound freight train beckons
a new hobo set.
spendius
 
  2  
Thu 29 Oct, 2009 09:29 am
@tsarstepan,
A new hobo set
His back pack on the park bench.
He hitched up his pants.

tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 29 Oct, 2009 03:58 pm
@spendius,
He hitched up his pants
as he went to settle some
issues with that cat
 

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