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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 11:25 am
Cracking our fingers
We prepare for the battle
Of darkness and light.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 12:11 pm
Cracking our fingers
snapping our bones to pieces
the cannibals drool.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 12:14 pm
woops! i I like yours better, Clary.

Of darkness and light
are many spirits 'round us
fighting for control.
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willow tl
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 02:47 pm
fighting for control.
I look at the mirror now.
Atkins diet it is!
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 03:09 pm
Atkins diet it is,
No carbs, plenty of protein,
Occasional greens.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 03:18 pm
Occasional greens
some yellows, blues and reds too
spots from a flash bulb!
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 03:23 pm
Spots from a flash bulb
Invade the unwilling eye.
Photography stinks.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 03:36 pm
Photography stinks!
body parts cut, fuzzy haze,
I'm selling this thing!
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 04:13 pm
I'm selling this thing,
but who will believe that this
hairdo is unused.
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Rod3
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 05:17 pm
hairdo is unused
because he wears a toupee
a frizzy blonde one.
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patiodog
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 05:27 pm
a frizzy blond one
two well-groomed, shapely brunettes
and a carrot top
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 06:03 pm
And a carrot top
added to the compost heap,
means chlorphyll growth.
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Clary
 
  1  
Mon 3 May, 2004 01:17 am
Means chlorophyll growth -
These burgeoning spring leaves that
Block out the grey sky.
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Synonymph
 
  1  
Mon 3 May, 2004 09:20 am
Block out the grey sky,
O glaring metal disk sun!
Drench earth with your rays
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Mon 3 May, 2004 10:40 am
Drench Earth with your rays,
You deeply deplorable
Thing from Outer Space.


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Clary
 
  1  
Mon 3 May, 2004 10:47 am
Thing from Outer Space
Coming through the windows of
My tenth floor office!
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Mon 3 May, 2004 11:08 am
My tenth floor office
Has a beautiful view. I
See thugs scrawl on walls.



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Clary
 
  1  
Mon 3 May, 2004 01:35 pm
See thugs scrawl on walls,
Tramps urinate in gutters;
Mothers scream at kids.
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patiodog
 
  1  
Mon 3 May, 2004 01:50 pm
Mothers scream at kids
Sandpiper dances with waves
Momma piper nags
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Synonymph
 
  1  
Mon 3 May, 2004 02:35 pm
dròm_et_rêve wrote:
Drench Earth with your rays,
You deeply deplorable
Thing from Outer Space.




Perfect segue.
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