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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 30 Apr, 2004 05:12 pm
Hamlet's meaning's changed?
Was it the minute version?
Did they all still die?
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 11:34 am
Did they all still die?
Why yes, of course, Hamlet would
Be comic if not.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 01:48 pm
Be comic if not
then sadness overwhelms us
tragic that would be
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 05:34 pm
Tragic that would be,
if we couldn't touch each face
that is dear to us.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 05:36 pm
That is dear to us -
The garden in the sunlight,
The frog in the pond.
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Rod3
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 05:56 pm
The frog in the pond
Is green and wet and slimey
Is it a princess?
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 05:59 pm
Is it a princess
That gazes wistfully down
On cornflower fields?


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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 06:28 pm
On cornflower fields?
Or is it some other bloom
that I see here now?

((Welcome Rod3))
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kirsten
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 06:53 pm
that I see here now?
through my swollen teary eyes
'tis remarkable
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 07:04 pm
'tis remarkable
after winter's cold I see
flowers blooming, life!
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 07:05 pm
flowers blooming, life-
sized cows standing in the yard,
is this a surprise?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 07:10 pm
is this a surprise?
and me in my bathrobe now!
In-laws never call!
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solar
 
  1  
Sat 1 May, 2004 07:43 pm
In-laws never call!
Because I once threw them out.
Daughter-in-laws rule!
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 12:50 am
Daughter-in-laws rule!
The Hindu world is reeling
From this disrespect!
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msolga
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 03:32 am
(I have the sneaking suspicion you're talking from experience, Clary. I hope so! Smile )
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 07:13 am
From this disrespect,
to the props you're due, is not
that far, this fine day.
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solar
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 07:15 am
(just so you know, i'm not married and don't have in-laws)

From this disrespect!
do civilized worlds collapse.
Love one another!
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 08:08 am
Love one another!
So ordered Chrit the teacher.
However, we don't.

Ah, I see there were 2 entries

That far, this fine day
We ought to hike and scramble.
However, we don't.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 08:17 am
ohhh, Clary's on doubles duty! Very Happy

However, we don't
appreciate the great work
she does, rescuing.
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patiodog
 
  1  
Sun 2 May, 2004 08:43 am
she does, rescuing
more than we see, complaining,
cracking our fingers
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