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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 11 Sep, 2009 06:34 pm
@iamsam82,
She gives her soul too.
Playing about like a sleuth,
reveal your real self.
Rockhead
 
  1  
Fri 11 Sep, 2009 11:32 pm
@Dutchy,
reveal your real self
while covering your heart
sometimes tough to do
iamsam82
 
  1  
Sat 12 Sep, 2009 04:23 am
@Rockhead,
Sometimes tough to do
The dirty on your partner.
But we persevere.
ehBeth
 
  2  
Sun 13 Sep, 2009 08:45 am
@iamsam82,
But we persevere,
digging through muddy patches.
Potato harvest.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 13 Sep, 2009 04:40 pm
@ehBeth,
Potato harvest.
Buying from each store in here,
no more money left.
Nevermind
 
  1  
Sun 20 Sep, 2009 11:24 pm
@Dutchy,
No more money left
Isn't that always the case
So sad to be poor
ossobuco
 
  2  
Sun 20 Sep, 2009 11:35 pm
@Nevermind,
So sad to be poor -
I understand this. Tell me
why you trust people?
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 21 Sep, 2009 04:50 pm
@ossobuco,
why you trust people?
By speaking with an honest heart,
and telling no lies.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Mon 21 Sep, 2009 05:31 pm
@Dutchy,
and telling no lies
as far as I know, I gain
rest and some balance.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 21 Sep, 2009 06:00 pm
@ossobuco,
Rest and some balance.
Do you know what I'm thinking,
hey, don't you let go
ossobuco
 
  2  
Mon 21 Sep, 2009 06:30 pm
@Dutchy,
Hey, don't you let go,
don't you let go, oh, oh, oh -
lyric for our times.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 22 Sep, 2009 05:49 am
@ossobuco,
lyric for our times.
In your yard with a beer ok,
life is good today.
iamsam82
 
  2  
Wed 23 Sep, 2009 11:15 am
@Dutchy,
Life is good today,
But has quite a history.
How will it behave?
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 23 Sep, 2009 04:33 pm
@iamsam82,
How will it behave?
It is a constant movement,
forever flowing.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Wed 23 Sep, 2009 04:39 pm
@Dutchy,
Forever flowing,
the Don, the Danube, and the
Dnieper pass time.
Dutchy
 
  2  
Wed 23 Sep, 2009 05:04 pm
@ossobuco,
Dnieper pass time.
Above the river, will he
kiss her now, or jump?
farmerman
 
  2  
Wed 23 Sep, 2009 05:10 pm
@Dutchy,
kiss her now , or jump
Thats the question he ponders.
Why not just do both.
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Thu 24 Sep, 2009 01:46 pm
@farmerman,
I love these threads. Its been forever since I last saw one. Surprised

Here goes:
Why not just do both
cried the soft portly baker
bake then eat the cake

(I apologize for this particular rank poem. I've been rusty in that department.)
Dutchy
 
  2  
Thu 24 Sep, 2009 05:27 pm
@tsarstepan,
bake then eat the cake.
One of life's greatest forces,
start young it's better.

(You're doing fine tsarstepan)
iamsam82
 
  2  
Sun 4 Oct, 2009 05:21 am
@Dutchy,
Start young, it's better.
Work for the middle forty,
Then back to childhood.
 

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