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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
iamsam82
 
  1  
Mon 31 Aug, 2009 07:30 am
@Dutchy,
The weeping willow
Turns its silver back toward
The wind, and shivers.
farmerman
 
  1  
Mon 31 Aug, 2009 07:48 am
@iamsam82,
The eagle ascends
on the simmering currents
of late summer air.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Mon 31 Aug, 2009 07:59 am
@farmerman,
Of late, summer air
Has made me dim - but I know:
Use last line for first!
devriesj
 
  1  
Mon 31 Aug, 2009 10:22 am
@iamsam82,
Use last line for first
is the way of this here thread!
Now get started fast!
iamsam82
 
  1  
Mon 31 Aug, 2009 11:44 am
@devriesj,
"Now get started fast!"
Ordered the fat pinstriped boss,
Breaking Sunday dreams.
devriesj
 
  1  
Mon 31 Aug, 2009 12:17 pm
@iamsam82,
Breaking Sunday dreams,
alarm woke me from slumber.
Time for morning jog!
iamsam82
 
  2  
Mon 31 Aug, 2009 01:54 pm
@devriesj,
Time for morning jog.
Indeed. If only I could
Jog my memory.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 31 Aug, 2009 04:26 pm
@iamsam82,
Jog my memoiry.
Floors creaking, windows rattling,
cobwebs across stairs.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Mon 31 Aug, 2009 04:47 pm
@Dutchy,
Cobwebs across the stairs;
Dust upon the dinnerplates;
Salt on withered cheeks.
Nevermind
 
  2  
Tue 1 Sep, 2009 10:51 pm
@iamsam82,
Salt on withered cheeks
Gray temples marking his face
Wisdom beyond years
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 1 Sep, 2009 11:27 pm
@Nevermind,
Wisdom beyond years.
Encircling so her slim waist,
we start to Tango.
Nevermind
 
  2  
Wed 2 Sep, 2009 06:43 pm
@Dutchy,
We start to Tango
Dancing slow at first then fast
The clock strikes midnight
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 2 Sep, 2009 08:15 pm
@Nevermind,
The clock strikes midnight,
Time to call it a day, and
take my new friend home.
Nevermind
 
  1  
Thu 3 Sep, 2009 10:52 pm
@Dutchy,
Take my new friend home
A place of peaceful comfort
Home is your castle
Late 2 gate
 
  2  
Fri 4 Sep, 2009 09:30 am
@Nevermind,
Home is your castle
Except when guests stay too long
Then it is prison
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 4 Sep, 2009 05:22 pm
@Late 2 gate,
Then it is prison.
Dense clouds drift away with wind,
a blushing sun shines.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Sun 6 Sep, 2009 06:46 am
@Dutchy,
A blushing sun shines,
Shamed to shoo the moon away,
Who fed night with light.
Nevermind
 
  2  
Mon 7 Sep, 2009 05:36 pm
@iamsam82,
Who fed night with light
Who cast shadows in the sun
Mystery person
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 7 Sep, 2009 06:05 pm
@Nevermind,
Mystery person.
Beauty, unselfconsciousness
gives each movement grace.
iamsam82
 
  2  
Thu 10 Sep, 2009 01:45 pm
@Dutchy,
Gives each movement, Grace,
The dancer at the pole, does.
She gives her soul too.
 

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