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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 23 Feb, 2008 03:49 am
drunks sluts sometimes drool
but not this gorgeous lady
an old hand at it.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 24 Feb, 2008 03:16 am
An old hand at it
He was, and tied the rope with a
Professional knot.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 24 Feb, 2008 03:37 am
Professional knot.
That's what cruel Saddam Hussein felt,
dropping through trap door.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Fri 7 Mar, 2008 06:21 pm
dropping through trap door
actor weaving magic spells
caught in the mind's web
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Equus
 
  1  
Fri 7 Mar, 2008 06:55 pm
Caught in the mind's web,
This skull hasn't been used much.
No activity.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 7 Mar, 2008 09:02 pm
No activity
and frequent lividity
lead to losing spree.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 7 Mar, 2008 09:26 pm
lead to losing spree
not betting on horses am I
that's just for suckers.
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Equus
 
  1  
Tue 11 Mar, 2008 03:49 pm
That's just for suckers,
lollipops and tootsie rolls.
Processed sugar. Yum!
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lezzles
 
  1  
Tue 11 Mar, 2008 09:53 pm
Processed sugar. (Yum!)
Quoth the raven 'Nevermore!'
No candies, fatso!
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 12 Mar, 2008 06:37 am
No candies, fatso!
Let me pour you a cold beer
Would you like that Sir?
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Wainui
 
  1  
Thu 13 Mar, 2008 09:42 pm
Would you like that Sir?
I asked in haste
Merrily dancing in limbo
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lezzles
 
  1  
Thu 13 Mar, 2008 10:11 pm
Hi, Wainui! Welcome to A2K!

Good try for a first effort, but these can be tricky......

First line = Five syllables
Second line = Seven syllables
Third line = Five syllables

So,

Would you like that, Sir?
I asked in haste, merrily,
dancing in limbo.

Would fit the bill nicely. Keep posting!


Dancing in limbo -
Everyone bending backwards -
Sway under the bar!
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 13 Mar, 2008 11:20 pm
Sway under the bar!
That's me after twelve stubbies,
Not recommended.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 14 Mar, 2008 05:08 am
Not recommended,
The '45 vintage port.
A hint of ptomaine.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 14 Mar, 2008 07:36 am
A hint of ptomaine.
Which means foul smelling stench from
decay of proteins.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Sat 15 Mar, 2008 02:46 pm
decay of proteins
vegetation turned to mush
better clean the fridge
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 15 Mar, 2008 07:00 pm
better clean the fridge
first thing in the morning kirsten
will that do my dear.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Sat 15 Mar, 2008 08:10 pm
Will that do my dear?
Or, would you prefer like this?
The choices are few.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 15 Mar, 2008 09:11 pm
The choices are few
and poor selections can skew
scandalous results....
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 16 Mar, 2008 02:33 am
scandalous results....
will happen regardless what
so improve yourself.
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