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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
lezzles
 
  1  
Sun 30 Sep, 2007 11:40 pm
Are you all right now
The earthquake is all over?
You're a tad dusty!
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 2 Oct, 2007 04:16 am
You're a tad dusty!
Why don't you clean your room more
I wouldn't look like this.
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 2 Oct, 2007 05:37 am
I wouldn't look like
A haystack in a high wind
If I found my brush.
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Equus
 
  1  
Wed 3 Oct, 2007 02:00 pm
If I found my brush
I could brush my teeth at last
If I had toothpaste
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kirsten
 
  1  
Fri 5 Oct, 2007 01:49 pm
If I had toothpaste
I could brush my teeth at last
If I find my teeth
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 5 Oct, 2007 02:11 pm
If I find my teeth
I will kiss you on the lips
Hope that pleases you
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lezzles
 
  1  
Sun 7 Oct, 2007 06:48 am
Hope that pleases you
When they phone to let you know
You've won the money!
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 7 Oct, 2007 08:10 am
You've won the money
Now spend it on a yacht with
A uniformed crew.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 8 Oct, 2007 03:32 am
A uniformed crew
To sail you around the world
Looking at countries
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lezzles
 
  1  
Wed 10 Oct, 2007 08:29 pm
Looking at countries
From such a far-off distance
Makes me want to fly.
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FlyFoy
 
  1  
Fri 12 Oct, 2007 06:35 pm
Makes me want to fly
When I see birds doing it.
Do you feel the same?
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 12 Oct, 2007 06:39 pm
Do you feel the same
Absolutely my friend
Can I join you please?
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 28 Oct, 2007 02:00 pm
Can I join you? Please

say yes and smile fetchingly.

I'll bring pipes, and play.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 28 Oct, 2007 04:19 pm
I'' bring pipes, and play.
How very kind of you dear.
You won't fight will you?
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Equus
 
  1  
Sun 11 Nov, 2007 08:55 pm
You won't fight will you?
Because I'm wearing glasses
...Don't like pain, either.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 11 Nov, 2007 08:59 pm
Don't like pain? Either
remove those hair curlers now,
or suffer, my sweet.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 13 Nov, 2007 01:59 am
or suffer, my sweet.
Do you feel lonely my dear
or are you happy?
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counterpoint
 
  1  
Tue 13 Nov, 2007 02:14 pm
or are you happy?
living this meaningless life
again and again
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 15 Nov, 2007 05:07 am
again and again
you are pushing the limits
will you never stop?
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 16 Nov, 2007 04:30 pm
Will you never stop

tempting the fools, pushing the

bound'ries, laughing loud.
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