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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
McTag
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 12:54 am
Too cold in Carlisle
The brain is not frozen but
Something seems to be
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Clary
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 03:17 am
Something seems to be
Wrong with my television's
Smart satellite dish.
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McTag
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 03:55 am
Smart satellite dish
Care in the Community
Oxymorons, yes?
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Mame
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 07:28 am
Oxymorons, yes...
Jumbo Shrimp, Civil Service
These are all correct
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 09:11 am
These are all correct
Its like three blind mice
Absolutely going nowhere.
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Mame
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 09:32 am
Absolutely going nowhere
Your haiku has too many
darn syllables ! Smile


Good morning, M.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 10:00 am
Hi Mame,

Take no notice of my Haku formation, I hate rules.

Darn syllables
Counting up, counting down
Be like me and just write it down.
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Mame
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 10:16 am
Be like me and just write it down
You're a riot, Mathos
Such an original
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 10:24 am
Such an original
Why be like the rest
They become tedious
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Mame
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 10:29 am
They become tedious
Like sands through an hourglass
trickling, trickling....
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 10:38 am
Trickling, trickling...
Time waits for no man
Isn't life short ?
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Mame
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 10:39 am
Isn't life short....
Perhaps I find it too long
What do you say now?
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 11:14 am
What do you say now?
I feel you may be pining
Is that possible?
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Mame
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 11:17 am
Is that possible?
Pining for a pine box, eh?
Nay, I'm a happy gal.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 11:19 am
Nay, I'm a happy gal
You look divine as well
I'm satisfied at your reply.
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Mame
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 11:20 am
"I'm satisfied at your reply"
tsk 8 syllables again
You have a stubborn streak!
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 11:24 am
You have a stubborn streak
Are you trying to
Fetch Mathos to heel?
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Mame
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 11:27 am
Fetch Mathos to heel?
What a concept! I don't think
that's an option...
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 02:21 pm
That's an option
A testing time indeed
Would he settle though?
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Mame
 
  1  
Mon 16 Jan, 2006 02:23 pm
Would he settle though?
I most certainly hope not
Keep to your standards!
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