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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
lezzles
 
  1  
Sat 7 Jan, 2006 05:37 am
Some call paradise
a place of eternal joy.
I long to be there.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 7 Jan, 2006 06:32 am
I long to be there
But would not wish away my
Time on earth. Would you?
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McTag
 
  1  
Sat 7 Jan, 2006 07:00 am
Time on earth, would you
Please stop that finger writing
I wish to retract
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 7 Jan, 2006 07:03 am
I wish to retract
The rash promise I made to
Love, honour, obey.
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shari6905
 
  1  
Sat 7 Jan, 2006 02:45 pm
Love, honour, obey
Doesnt mean anything when
you hate eachother
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 7 Jan, 2006 03:54 pm
You hate each other
yet are strangely attracted.
Ah, it must be lust!
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whiteviolet
 
  1  
Sat 7 Jan, 2006 06:03 pm
Ah, it must be lust!
But when time passes away,
Lust, too, vanishes.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 8 Jan, 2006 01:20 pm
Lust, too, vanishes
After you have seen his long
Pale skinny body.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 8 Jan, 2006 01:41 pm
Pale skinny body
Good lord, she drew his blood
Will he rise again?
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lezzles
 
  1  
Sun 8 Jan, 2006 10:12 pm
Will he rise again?
Does she really want him to?
It does not seem so.
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lmur
 
  1  
Mon 9 Jan, 2006 06:00 am
It does not seem so,
Nor is, nor was, forever
And ever, amen.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 9 Jan, 2006 11:30 am
And ever, amen.
Should we all be kneeling
Praising The Lord?
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Equus
 
  1  
Mon 9 Jan, 2006 11:52 am
"Praising" the Lord???? oops
I thought sure you said 'braising'
...He was quite tasty
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lmur
 
  1  
Mon 9 Jan, 2006 12:09 pm
He was quite tasty
Especially when seasoned
With herbs and spices
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 9 Jan, 2006 12:13 pm
With herbs and spices
Burnt toast tastes really great
When your hungry.
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McTag
 
  1  
Mon 9 Jan, 2006 12:52 pm
When your hungry wee
Eyes light on a roasted goose
All other thoughts go
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whiteviolet
 
  1  
Mon 9 Jan, 2006 06:08 pm
All other thoughts go
Away when you see the moon.
Pale crescent of love.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Tue 10 Jan, 2006 07:53 am
Pale crescent of love
Serenades from a gondola
How irrationally soppy.
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lezzles
 
  1  
Tue 10 Jan, 2006 11:23 pm
How irrational-
ly soppy to weep "Alas!
He just will not count!"
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McTag
 
  1  
Wed 11 Jan, 2006 03:24 am
He just will not count
Me among his greatest fans
If he lets me down
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