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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
theollady
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 07:25 am
'til invited in
I wait by the cabin door
And drink in the view
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 07:42 am
And drink in the view
from the bottom of my brew.
I'll have another.


(*cute new avatar pic, 'ollady!)
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theollady
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 08:09 am
Thank you, I like twenty years younger :wink:

I'll have another
And maybe a bagel too
Get something for you?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 09:09 am
Get something for you
to wipe off your face? It's a
bit messy from ribs!
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 09:31 am
Bit messy from ribs
and barbeque sauce, she wiped
her hands on her jeans....
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theollady
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 12:51 pm
her hands on her jeans
finding keys in the pocket
sat back down to eat.
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 03:16 pm
Sat back down to eat
With a satisfied grunt and
A glass of red wine.
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Equus
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 04:23 pm
A glass of red wine
Aaaah. Fresh from a cardboard box
It was a good 'month'.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 05:25 pm
It was a good month,
said Peebles. Just look at all
the dregs we collected.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 07:28 pm
The dregs we collected
from the ocean's shore; some shells,
sea glass, our treasures.
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aidan
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 07:41 pm
Sea glass, our treasures
Rubbed smooth by the ocean's waves-
Tumbling it over.
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theollady
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 08:25 pm
Tumbling it over
I looked at the zircon gem
It was so lovely
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 08:32 pm
It was so lovely
and yet so false. Omen
of things yet to come?
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theollady
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jul, 2005 11:27 pm
Of things yet to come
We are hopeful all day long
Crossing fingers too.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 15 Jul, 2005 01:08 am
Crossed fingers too
Long cuts off circulation.
Your fingers drop off.
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 15 Jul, 2005 05:11 am
Your fingers drop off-
Your toes turn purple and black-
Frost bite leaves its mark.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 15 Jul, 2005 05:16 am
Frost bite leaves its mark
Your nose and ears, fingers, toes
None are free from pain
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 15 Jul, 2005 05:22 am
None are free from pain
But some learn how to numb it
Even free themselves.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 15 Jul, 2005 05:23 am
Even free themselves
Though they know not how or why
Only that they must
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 15 Jul, 2005 06:58 am
Only that they must
Not walk on the cracks of the
Toronto pavements.
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