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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
devriesj
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 05:02 am
"Make you very ill
it will," said Yoda of that
food. "Eat it not, you."
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theollady
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 05:42 am
Take in too much now
Then you suffer in sorrow
Just give me a few
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kirsten
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 07:43 am
Food! Eat it not, you!
Thus saith lord of diets
Behold the weak willed
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theollady
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 08:01 am
Behold the weak willed
She has maybe waked up now!
Will pay attention.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 02:07 pm
Will, pay attention!
Sit up straight and speak when you
Are spoken to, Will.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 03:30 pm
Are spoken to ,Will?
Did you mean Ah or Argh
It does matter.
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theollady
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 03:42 pm
It does (not) matter
to me whether four or five
'Cause I am alive
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Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 03:44 pm
Cause I am alive
To be or not to be
Was the question
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theollady
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 04:13 pm
Was (this) the question
Five, seven, another five
Haiku lines come alive
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Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 04:16 pm
Haiku lines come alive
Just have fun
Put it down as you feel it, who cares?
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theollady
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 04:38 pm
There is a topic thread for that on Original writing Mathos. It is called Spontaneous Poems (verse, whatever)

Haiku purists should have their space, wouldn't you agree?

Put it down as you
Feel it, who cares if it clicks?
Well, I think I do


(I do not mean to be offensive, goodnight)
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 06:11 pm
"Well, I think I do,"
she said, and I think so too.
Haiku have pat form.
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bombom
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 06:58 pm
Haiku have pat form,
although not my native tongue
tried to rhyme like songs
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Clary
 
  1  
Mon 11 Jul, 2005 03:10 am
Muy bien, Bombom!

Tried to rhyme like songs,
But rhythm is the thing with
Haiku. Doing well!
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theollady
 
  1  
Mon 11 Jul, 2005 07:59 am
Have my trou ble ing
With some ma jor pud dle ing
Storm show er ing down!
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devriesj
 
  1  
Mon 11 Jul, 2005 10:44 am
Haiku doing well.
This thread goes on and on and...
some are good, some bad.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Mon 11 Jul, 2005 10:56 am
Some are good, some bad
Some can even make you laugh
You can cry with some
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devriesj
 
  1  
Mon 11 Jul, 2005 11:00 am
You can cry with some,
but not with others. Why so?
Perhaps lies in self?
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Clary
 
  1  
Mon 11 Jul, 2005 12:00 pm
Perhaps lies in self
Set up friction with the truth
Resulting in stress.
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Mon 11 Jul, 2005 12:25 pm
resulting in stress:
pressure, coming down on me,
coming down on you. . .
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