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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
theollady
 
  1  
Fri 8 Jul, 2005 09:58 pm
All's well that ends well?
At times it is hard to tell
Come- swift, sweet ending
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 01:17 am
Come swift, sweet ending,
Finish this tedious book;
It is so boring!
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theollady
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 07:42 am
So I read for fun
But this one has me undone
My taste is changing
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aidan
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 09:38 am
My taste is changing-
Are we being analyzed?
Scared to write haiku...

*Don't want to be misinterpreted. Did I miss something? Once again, very confused....
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 09:44 am
It is so boring -
like watching cement dry or
watching water boil!
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 09:47 am
No, aidan, you didn't miss anything. I think 'theollady' hasn't been on this thread before, and down't know the 'rule' about taking the last line of the previous post and using that to make another haiku. Clear as mud?
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aidan
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 09:50 am
Thanks dev - yeah I guess. I thought we had written some nice ones last night - really poetic-nice sentiments - what's not to like?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 09:54 am
There have been some good ones!
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krystal tipps
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 10:16 am
Watching water boil!
I wish it would hurry up
I would like a tea
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 10:22 am
Welcome to a2k, krystal_tipps!

I would like a tea.
After all, it is the time
for crumpets and such.
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krystal tipps
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 10:29 am
for crumpets and such
i have no desire for i
had pie already
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bombom
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 12:23 pm
had pie already,
after this fine meal, just dry
amaretto please!

Welcome krystal_tipps!! Very Happy
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krystal tipps
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 12:34 pm
ameretto please!
just one bottle as my head
won't cope tomorrow
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theollady
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 02:24 pm
Wont cope tomorrow
Today has been so draining
Prop up my feet now
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firefly
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 03:40 pm
Prop up my feet now
And watch some television
I want to relax
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theollady
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 03:54 pm
I want to relax
So I shall go to bed now
See you tomorrow



(good nite all)
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firefly
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 04:20 pm
See you tomorrow
It's time to call it a day
After some ice cream
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aidan
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 09:08 pm
After some ice-cream
Choc'late with toffee syrup
And a banana.
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firefly
 
  1  
Sat 9 Jul, 2005 09:38 pm
And a banana
Provides you potassium
Watch those nutrients
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 10 Jul, 2005 01:40 am
Watch those nutrients -
Too much and too many can
Make you very ill.
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