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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Shazzer
 
  1  
Thu 16 Jun, 2005 07:17 pm
the astronauts fell
a catastrophe of the
heart and human mind
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 16 Jun, 2005 07:33 pm
heart and human mind
cannot fathom the length of
an eternity
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Thu 16 Jun, 2005 07:54 pm
an eternity
is in the time between birth
and your child's first breath
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aidan
 
  1  
Thu 16 Jun, 2005 11:22 pm
And your child's first breath
Brings new life into the old.
A lovely rebirth.

*Beautiful haiku and especially like the last line, Shazzer - glad I was here to take it.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 12:53 am
A lovely rebirth
when you see yourself in your
child's reflected smile
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 01:53 am
Child's reflected smile
A glimpse of all life's promise
On one precious face.

*another beautiful one Devvie - children just make us girls wax poetic I guess!
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 01:56 am
On one precious face
Focus all our hopes and fears -
Unbearable love.
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 07:57 am
Unbearable love-
"sweet bird although you did not
see me - I saw you."


*another beautiful one Clary - I'm writing these down. The second and third lines of mine are from a song about motherhood by Sinead O'Connor.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 09:30 am
see me - I saw you
you thought your path was hidden
you were in plain sight
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 09:46 am
You were in plain sight.
hiding before me the whole
time. I have found love.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 10:34 am
Time I have. Found love?
Once I thought I had, but time
Showed me otherwise.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 10:53 am
Showed me otherwise
than what I thought truly was -
a tragic mistake
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spendius
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 11:13 am
A tragic mistake.

I have been told I once was.

It makes no odds now.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 11:29 am
It makes no odds now.
The past is in the past. We
can learn from't or not.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 03:35 pm
can learn from't or not
experience our teacher
slapped by her ruler
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Equus
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 04:35 pm
Slapped by her ruler
First grade teacher must hate me
I did nothing wrong
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 17 Jun, 2005 05:58 pm
I did nothing wrong
So why did you slap me? Must
be so sadistic!
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 18 Jun, 2005 02:59 am
Be so sadistic -
Come on, hit me and twist my
Arms behind my back.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Sat 18 Jun, 2005 07:27 am
Arms behind my back
Succulent grape in my teeth
Come, let's share that kiss
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 18 Jun, 2005 10:16 am
Come, let's share that kiss
and see what comes of it, love.
Perhaps a new tryst?
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