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aidan
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 12:42 pm
Truly awful art!
I was never over-awed
"Til I saw full scope.

*We went to the Van Gough museum in Amsterdam - I was blown away by the breadth of his work - I had had no idea.
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 12:45 pm
Till I saw full 'scope
The telescope was hidden from
View behind the hedge.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 12:52 pm
View behind the hedge
was most disturbing to me
I'll never tell ...
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aidan
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 12:56 pm
I'll never tell
what is was that I witnessed
that day in the zoo.
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 02:32 pm
That day in the zoo
I lost my silver bracelet
And I still miss it
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aidan
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 02:33 pm
And I still miss it
That pretty little bauble
Meant the world to me.
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 02:48 pm
Meant the world to me -
Your adoration and the
Money you left me.
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spendius
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 03:13 pm
Money you left me!!

Call that money you miser you!

A measly ten grand.
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aidan
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 03:35 pm
A measley ten grand
Pounds or dollars - would it be?
Would make some difference.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 03:43 pm
spendius wrote:
Mathos-

Try to learn the rules old chap.Blurting the first thing that comes into your head is considered considerably naff on here and with devvie watching
it's ridiculous.

But saved at the last

The bridegroom said to his Mum.

And the bride just smiled.(if smiled is 2 then-and the bride smiled.)


Spendius,

There are no rules.

Rules are for fools,
They wriggle and shout,
Then along comes the doorman,
And gives Spendius a clout.
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aidan
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 03:48 pm
Gives Spendi a clout.
Who? The doorman, you, or me?
We're standing in line....
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Mathos
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 03:53 pm
We're standing in line.
Waiting for the Yorkshire oaf!
To raise his head!
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aidan
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 03:58 pm
To raise his head-
Sure you want to witness that?
It might be a shock.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 04:10 pm
It might be a shock
If he's sober
I think Spendis deranged
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aidan
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 04:15 pm
I think Spendi's deranged.
Huh? Really? You think so, Bud?
Does that affect you?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 08:02 pm
Does that affect you
poor Spendi-, dear? Or is your
hide of thicker stuff?
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kirsten
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2005 08:53 pm
Hide of thicker stuff?
Impenatrable he thinks?
What of Cupid's dart?
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 16 Jun, 2005 02:33 am
What of Cupid's dart?
Spendi seems sex-obsessed but
Maybe he needs Love?
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spendius
 
  1  
Thu 16 Jun, 2005 03:47 am
Maybe he needs love?

Oh!I do,I do,I do!

And understanding!
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 16 Jun, 2005 03:54 am
And understanding
This, what tips can we give to
Make him appealing?
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