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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 04:33 pm
Slumber will follow
Very shortly, for I am
Going to bed now!

g'night!
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aidan
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 04:37 pm
Going to bed now?
Dear Clary, all the fun stops.
Who else wants to play?
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 04:41 pm
Aidan, my lady,

Were it not for the fact that I too need to slumber for an early morning start, I would talk, as it is, I must say goodnight. Sweet dreams.
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spendius
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 04:56 pm
There's 33 syllables in that second line and it is therefore disqualified sine die.An appeal might have been allowed but with no third line,which is utterly disgraceful,you can whistle for it.

Who else wants to play?
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kickycan
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:01 pm
who else wants to play
asks spendius, cordially
And now we will see
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spendius
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:04 pm
And now we will see.

I have flipped the switch.Listen!

A new voice appears.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:17 pm
Long time no see, kicky!

A new voice appears
alone in the dark of night
mysterious one
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:23 pm
Mysterious. One
wonders about many things
when the night is long.
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spendius
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:25 pm
Mysterious one:

With your long black boots,and briefs.

Is kicky a friend?
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aidan
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:28 pm
Is Kicky a friend?
I don't know, we've never met.
Looks like a nice guy.
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spendius
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:31 pm
Looks a nice guy?

Looks a nice guy,she says!

Look into those eyes.
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aidan
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:32 pm
Look into those eyes
Shaded and mysterious.
What secrets lie there?
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spendius
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:49 pm
What secrets lie there?

There are such things as Unions.

We keep our secrets.
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aidan
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2005 05:51 pm
We keep our secrets
locked away inside our hearts.
Dare we trust unions?
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spendius
 
  1  
Tue 14 Jun, 2005 07:19 am
Dare we trust the unions?

Not the mother's union.

I'm certain of that.
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Equus
 
  1  
Tue 14 Jun, 2005 08:50 am
"I'm certain of that,"
He said, stepping in open
Elevator shaft
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 14 Jun, 2005 09:27 am
Elevator shaft,
repair or removal, is
a tricky business.



pronounced, of course, bizness.
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 14 Jun, 2005 09:29 am
Elevator shaft
A long way to the bottom
Wouldn't want to fall.
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spendius
 
  1  
Tue 14 Jun, 2005 09:56 am
Wouldn't want to fall

Under the spell of a witch

Who means to use me.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 14 Jun, 2005 10:28 am
Hey, wait!
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