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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 09:59 am
Religious foreground
Distorts the here and now by
Eternal longings
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 10:07 am
Eternal longings,
I definitely have those!
In heaven no pain.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 11:25 am
In heaven no pain
But no thrills either, perhaps,
Just bland contentment.
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spendius
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 01:33 pm
Just bland contentment.

It's a safe place to rest in.

Away from the girls.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 01:45 pm
Away from the girls
With organdie dresses and
Yellow hair ribbons.
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spendius
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 01:47 pm
Yellow hair ribbons

Prettily wave in the wind.

A snare for catching.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 01:54 pm
A snare for catching
Voles and other small rodents
To be fed to owls.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 02:00 pm
To be fed to owls,

fowls lined up on dotted lines

and awaited rapture.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 02:08 pm
And awaited rapture
Is more rapturous than the
Unexpected sort.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 02:11 pm
Unexpected! Sort
of late to say that, when you
stood in line for hours!
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 02:24 pm
Stood in line for hours
When what I really wanted
Was days, weeks and months.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 02:26 pm
Was days, weeks and months
worth it when you could have stood
for years at a time?
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spendius
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 02:28 pm
For years at a time.

Ever heard of hormones mate?

Can't hold them up much.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 02:46 pm
Can't hold them up much,
chemical cycles speed by
on little cat's feet.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 02:51 pm
On little cat's feet
The dinky slippers looked silly
So she took them off.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 03:01 pm
So she took them off
Her beautiful gown and veil
Left at the altar
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satt fs
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 03:13 pm
Left at the altar
A candle stands in the dark
Without light on it
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 03:19 pm
Without light on it,
the painting looked gloomy to
the visitor from Spain.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 03:47 pm
Visitors from Spain
Are used to light but Goya
Could be quite gloomy.
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Rod3
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2005 03:57 pm
Could be quite gloomy
The sun as got his hat on
How naff is that eh?
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