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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Thu 26 May, 2005 04:50 am
Have all elements
Got long and difficult names?
Not gold, silver, lead.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 26 May, 2005 04:57 am
Not gold, silver, lead.
Especially lead. I just
can't wear't - too heavy!
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 26 May, 2005 03:59 pm
Can't wear't - too heavy
But, if I lose twenty pounds
It will look smashing
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 26 May, 2005 10:07 pm
They will look smashing,
don't you think? all those pumpkins
lying on the grass...





just had to correct my first take..
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 26 May, 2005 10:21 pm
Lying on the grass...
Smitten by love and pure lust
But, then they awoke
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Diane
 
  1  
Thu 26 May, 2005 10:29 pm
But. then they awoke
After erotic dreaming
Sigh, it's time to go.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 26 May, 2005 11:52 pm
Sigh, it's time to go
To be alone by myself
My very best friend
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 12:51 am
My very best friend
Cut my arms off and put them
In the spin dryer.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 01:22 am
In the spin dryer
my very best whirls around
and arrives wrinkled.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 04:51 am
And arrives wrinkled
At the party at the end
Of eternity.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 04:57 am
Of eternity
We can only speculate
Are our lives finite?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 07:40 am
Are our lives finite
or do we continue on
ad infinitum?
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 07:53 am
Ad infinitum
Sue rambled on endlessly
I think she's senile
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 08:43 am
I think she's senile
You know, that clever Clary
Maybe not too old
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 11:03 am
Maybe not too old
To enjoy blowing bubbles
Go ahead, try it
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spendius
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 01:49 pm
Go ahead try it

But take great care

She might bite your ass
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 04:15 pm
Go ahead, try it,
Bungee jump off this high bridge
Over the canal.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 04:45 pm
Over the canal
There were small covered bridges
I sketched one of them
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spendius
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 05:47 pm
I sketched one of them

Rough and quick

It didn't come out right.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 27 May, 2005 09:39 pm
It did come out right.
It pleased me to see the ink
dry on the paper.
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