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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Ceili
 
  1  
Fri 6 Feb, 2004 10:00 pm
you, laughing as well
like smirking gargoyles leering
halfway to heaven
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willow tl
 
  1  
Fri 6 Feb, 2004 11:04 pm
halfway to heaven
as you stroke my hair and face
soon the dawn will come.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 7 Feb, 2004 03:43 am
Soon the dawn will come,
Cars will leave their garages
For the long commute.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Sat 7 Feb, 2004 04:51 pm
For the long commute
Drink a tall mocha latte
Dash to the restroom
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willow tl
 
  1  
Sat 7 Feb, 2004 06:41 pm
Dash to the restroom
a last check of hair and face,
nothing out of place.
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larryta2
 
  1  
Sun 8 Feb, 2004 05:23 pm
Nothing out of place
Smile and go about business
Beauty is in you, true!
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 8 Feb, 2004 07:12 pm
hmm
i'll have to drop a syllable there

ahhhhh

Beauty's in you, true
beauty of the heart and soul.
Love becomes your smile.
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Ceili
 
  1  
Sun 8 Feb, 2004 07:29 pm
Love becomes your smile
I can see it in your eyes
Affection mirrored
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 8 Feb, 2004 07:32 pm
Affection mirrored,
your smile in my smile, my smile
in your eyes, laughing.
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Briana83
 
  1  
Sun 8 Feb, 2004 07:36 pm
ehBeth wrote:
Affection mirrored,
your smile in my smile, my smile
in your eyes, laughing.
In your eyes laughing
One only you can redeem
I see a lost soul
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hiama
 
  1  
Mon 9 Feb, 2004 05:12 am
I see a lost soul
Drowning in the sea of life
Reflections don't lie
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Clary
 
  1  
Mon 9 Feb, 2004 05:24 am
Reflections don't lie,
Mirrors show us the whole truth.
Better not to look.
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chaossoldiermsc
 
  1  
Mon 9 Feb, 2004 07:54 am
better not to look
underneath your bedroom bed
there's a monster there
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Clary
 
  1  
Mon 9 Feb, 2004 08:23 am
There's a monster - there -
Behind the old wooden door,
Under the raincoats.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Mon 9 Feb, 2004 08:02 pm
Under the raincoats,
the grey and beige coats, there are
rainbows of brilliance.
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sozobe
 
  1  
Mon 9 Feb, 2004 08:05 pm
rainbows of brilliance
briefly glimpsed in the steam that
rises from the river
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kirsten
 
  1  
Mon 9 Feb, 2004 08:16 pm
rises from the river
sniffs to smell the salty air
the thing with three humps
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Mon 9 Feb, 2004 08:18 pm
The thing with three humps
seen from a distance, frightens,
up close, we giggle.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Mon 9 Feb, 2004 10:21 pm
up close, we giggle
acting silly at our age
please, let's not grow up
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chaossoldiermsc
 
  1  
Tue 10 Feb, 2004 05:31 am
please, let's not grow up
time passes just too quickly
i gorw up too fast
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