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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
firefly
 
  1  
Wed 6 Apr, 2005 01:17 pm
Sorry, Clary, you were pipped :wink:

The sun is calling
And I've got a new swimsuit
Get outta my way!
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 6 Apr, 2005 01:17 pm
whoops

The sun is calling
On the moon and stars today,
Wearing a cloud hat.
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 6 Apr, 2005 01:19 pm
Get outta my way!
All you guys post so fast and
Think so rapidly.
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gravy
 
  1  
Wed 6 Apr, 2005 02:31 pm
think so rapidly
act swiftly, decidedly
and hope you were right
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kirsten
 
  1  
Wed 6 Apr, 2005 07:44 pm
and hope you were right
you said the test was foolproof
I can't stand the wait
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 04:40 am
I can't stand the wait -
My new slimming pills coming
In the mail today!
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 05:51 am
In the mail today
I received only more bills
I am sinking fast
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 06:17 am
I am sinking fast
Where is the bailing bucket
And the life jacket
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turtlette
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 06:48 am
Shocked Skip it.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 07:45 am
Turtlette....
FYI.....The first and third line should be 5 syllables and the 2nd line should be 7 :-)
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turtlette
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 07:49 am
Oh thanks Intrepid, it isn't easy being a nerbie, i mean newbie! Maybe I should have written NERD!
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partyfiend
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 08:44 am
And the life jacket
So comforting to have it
Thirty thousand feet
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 08:47 am
Thirty thousand feet
Said the millipede, is too
Many for wee me.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 08:48 am
Thirty thousand feet
A parachute would be good
Oh, a life jacket
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 08:52 am
pipped you, Intrepid! Smile
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 08:53 am
Crying or Very sad
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 08:54 am
Many for wee me
But how many are for me?
And, what could they be?
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partyfiend
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 08:57 am
...while you guys figure out who won the cross-post battle, here's a quick plug for my A-Z sentences game here at A2K, thanks for listening...
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partyfiend
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 09:01 am
And what could they be?
Those colourful packages
Round the Christmas tree

(just edited the punctuation)
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kirsten
 
  1  
Thu 7 Apr, 2005 09:57 am
Round the Christmas tree
Mysterious packages
Is there one for me?
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