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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
willow tl
 
  1  
Mon 21 Mar, 2005 03:44 am
like a thousand suns
white fire of obsession
burns too bright to last.
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Lord Ellpus
 
  1  
Mon 21 Mar, 2005 07:07 am
Burns too bright to last
I'd prefer a Havana
They're rolled on maidens thighs.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Mon 21 Mar, 2005 07:19 am
They're rolled on maidens thighs
Those stogeys of larger size
The maiden does sighs
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gravy
 
  1  
Mon 21 Mar, 2005 10:35 pm
the maiden does sighs
at insipid remarks on
listless afternoons
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kirsten
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 07:39 am
listless afternoons
on the porch, under a fan
bring the lemonade
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 06:14 pm
Bring the lemonade,
I'll bring the biscuits and jam.
Race to the hammock?
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 06:30 pm
Race to the hammock
Together we will lie down
Until the morrow
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 06:44 pm
Until the morrow,
when the clouds clear away, and
the sun shines on us.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 09:06 pm
The sun shines on us
The moon and stars shine brightly
We live in the light
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gravy
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 11:23 pm
we live in the light,
mindful moments of kindness
fireflies in darkness
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 11:27 pm
fireflies in darkness
sparkle brightly in the night
they brighten our way
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littlek
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 11:27 pm
fireflies in darkness
zig-zagging around the wood
like thoughts in a dream
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gravy
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 11:44 pm
like thoughts in a dream
love flutters between two souls
awaken me not
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littlek
 
  1  
Tue 22 Mar, 2005 11:48 pm
Gravy, that's beautiful!

They brighten our way
with beauty and soft lighting:
O, love and kindness
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gravy
 
  1  
Wed 23 Mar, 2005 12:03 am
(thanks, LK)

o, love and kindness
like two stars to light our skies
on those moonless nights
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zog
 
  1  
Wed 23 Mar, 2005 08:30 am
on those moonless nights
we have perfect cover
for our gruesome task
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zog
 
  1  
Wed 23 Mar, 2005 08:31 am
D'OH. FINGERS TOO BIG FOR HUMAN KEYBOARD.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Wed 23 Mar, 2005 08:32 am
from our gruesome task
we take solice in knowing
it is out of love
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kirsten
 
  1  
Wed 23 Mar, 2005 04:04 pm
it is out of love
that I made myself the fool
all saw it but me
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Equus
 
  1  
Wed 23 Mar, 2005 08:00 pm
All saw it but me.
I was tying my shoelace.
Just my stupid luck.
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