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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 12:31 pm
we need another syllable at the end there, Francis.

oh heck, i'll pick one.

I want no more fools.
Give me a man with a heart,
and a pounding pulse.
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Francis
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 12:49 pm
<<I'm still trying to count syllabes acurately. It seems I fail sometimes>>

And a pounding pulse
like a heart beating wildly
When your face shines
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Piffka
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 01:09 pm
Those syllables are tough... but your little doglet is soo cute. (Jack Russell?)

When your face shines (in)
the moonlight, ethereal
thoughts awaken me.
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Francis
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 02:08 pm
<<Right, jack russel>>

Thoughts awaken me
memories fade away
my heart stay hurting
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 03:22 pm
My heart stay hurting
But I'm determined to move
Forward with my life
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 03:59 pm
Forward? With my life,
we'll be lucky if we don't
repeat lunch again.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 04:05 pm
Repeat lunch again,
Eat as often as you can
You are much too thin
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 04:06 pm
You are much too thin
to survive winter here in
the Canajun north.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 04:10 pm
The Canajun north
Ain't no place for wimpy folk
They'll freeze their tits off
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 07:31 pm
They'll freeze their tits off,
if they refuse to button-
up their overcoats.
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Piffka
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 01:18 am
Up their overcoats!
Down their vests and wooly gloves.
We're dressed for winter.
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sublime1
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 01:47 am
We're dressed for winter
All covered from head to toe
Awaiting the snow
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firefly
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 06:33 am
Awaiting the snow
With ice melter and shovels
And praying for Spring
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Piffka
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 09:07 am
And praying for Spring
We wait for Winter Solstice.
Sun come back, come back.
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willow tl
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 09:08 am
Sun come back, come back
if only to warm me now
as winter winds blow.
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firefly
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 09:41 am
As winter winds blow
Even naked trees huddle
To keep away chill
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 10:00 am
To keep away chill,
we pour brandy and add glee
to hot chocolate.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 10:09 am
http://www.gifs.net/animate/sheridee.gif
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 11:14 am
To hot chocolate,
add a bit of spirits to
cure what ails you now.
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willow tl
 
  1  
Sat 4 Dec, 2004 11:32 am
cure what ails you
not bloody likely right now
too early for drinks.
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