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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Jameson
 
  1  
Tue 30 Nov, 2004 10:25 pm
Lovely words, yet not quite a Haiku...so I'll try to work with it....

Maybe I am wrong
It has happened once or twice
who is keeping count?
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Piffka
 
  1  
Tue 30 Nov, 2004 10:43 pm
Who is keeping count
Of the stars and grains of sand?
One by one by one.
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Diane
 
  1  
Tue 30 Nov, 2004 10:45 pm
One by one by one
The children show us the way
We need reminding.
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Jameson
 
  1  
Tue 30 Nov, 2004 10:51 pm
We need reminding
to eat our vegetables
please and thank you too!
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 1 Dec, 2004 12:33 pm
Please, and thank you, too
Are very often solely missed
We need more manners
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Francis
 
  1  
Wed 1 Dec, 2004 02:26 pm
We need more manners
To make a better world
respect anyone
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willow tl
 
  1  
Wed 1 Dec, 2004 02:35 pm
respect anyone
who talks to you with kindness
listen intently.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Wed 1 Dec, 2004 04:46 pm
Listen intently.
The sound you hear is my love,
drifting toward you.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Wed 1 Dec, 2004 07:55 pm
<you're right, Jameson, I must have been sound asleep when I wrote that one>


Drifting toward you, the
floating ice cream lid moves close
to your wading feet.
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firefly
 
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Thu 2 Dec, 2004 04:59 am
To your wading feet
The ocean gives a caress
While sand gives soft hugs
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Piffka
 
  1  
Thu 2 Dec, 2004 11:22 am
While sand gives soft hugs
Seawater provides the bath.
Warm sun, my blanket.
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Francis
 
  1  
Thu 2 Dec, 2004 12:47 pm
Warm sun, my blanket
Burn my long exposed skin
While mind goes wild
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Jameson
 
  1  
Thu 2 Dec, 2004 03:27 pm
While my mind goes wild
there is no chaos outside
only in my soul
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 2 Dec, 2004 07:36 pm
Only in my soul
will you find splintering ice
shards raining down low.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 03:14 am
Shards raining down low,
Lightning bolts scarify the
Skies. Armageddon.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 04:55 am
Skies Armageddon
Approches in angry clouds
Evil rains the earth
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Francis
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 06:39 am
Evil rains the earth
as dark extends it's shadow
over mourning skies
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 06:54 am
Over mourning skies
The sun hides in the heavens
Peace will come again
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 11:47 am
Peace will come again.
The kitchen will be tidy.
I can have it all.
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Francis
 
  1  
Fri 3 Dec, 2004 12:11 pm
I can have it all
See tides at the shore
I want no more
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