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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Piffka
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 10:34 am
We must part our souls.
Like parted hair on a girl,
It looks much neater.
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Diane
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 11:11 am
It looks much neater
When colorful clothes are worn
Matching is boring.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 11:27 am
Matching is boring;
one would be so blended as
to appear seamless.
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 12:48 pm
To appear seamless
The sheer black stockings must be
Silk-smooth all over
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Piffka
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 01:59 pm
Silk-smooth all over;
She shaves her legs every day.
Ahhh, it's de-lovely.
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willow tl
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 02:04 pm
Ahh, it's de-lovely
the de-light of fall colours
de-sires kindled.
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DrewDad
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 03:34 pm
Desires kindled,
They lay with one another.
Their kinders were sired.
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Diane
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 05:54 pm
Their kinders were sired
Was there any kith involved?
No, I meant was there a kiss?
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 08:17 pm
No, I meant was there a kiss?
I enjoy all the details
So, please tell me more.
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hey Ya
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 08:28 pm
So, please tell me more
about everything in life
is it worth living?
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 09:02 pm
Is it worth living?
I think it beats being dead
Wouldn't you agree?
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Piffka
 
  1  
Thu 18 Nov, 2004 10:19 pm
Wouldn't you agree?
Would you say yes, if I asked,
Or would you say no?
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kflux
 
  1  
Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:06 am
or would you say no?
no to my moist perfumed lips
taste them , savor them . yes
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kflux
 
  1  
Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:13 am
taste them , savor them , yes
red with wine , and wicked
full of desire kiss my tainted lips
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kflux
 
  1  
Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:17 am
oops Embarrassed too many words

full of desire kiss me
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kflux
 
  1  
Fri 19 Nov, 2004 12:21 am
full of desire , kiss me
grip my soul it is escaping me
free it from mortal coil.
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DrewDad
 
  1  
Fri 19 Nov, 2004 01:49 am
5-7-5 syllables.

Free it from mortal
Coil by transcendent music
And glorious song.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 19 Nov, 2004 02:14 am
- plus, you don't get to answer your own posts... in this particular format, but welcome, kflux -

And glorious song
tis true of thee and thine now
twined with grape vines, lifted glass.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 19 Nov, 2004 02:41 am
Syllables, Osso...?!


Grape vines, lifted glass,
The backdrop of lunch at the
Driftwood Winery.

(it's in West Australia - what a venue for lunch)
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willow tl
 
  1  
Fri 19 Nov, 2004 02:44 am
morning C

Driftwood Winery
an elegant offering
of vine ripe spirits.
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