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willow tl
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 11:42 pm
...Got any advice?
None i am sure you would adhere
experience best.
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Diane
 
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Reply Tue 16 Nov, 2004 11:46 pm
Experience best
When young enough to believe
Enthusiasm.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 12:50 am
Got any advice?
No, I've not, shut up your voice,
and don't warn the vice.
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firefly
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 07:37 am
And don't warn the Vice
President he's going to
Get the axe today
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Clary
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 11:36 am
Get the axe today,
Cut down the cherry tree and
Then don't lie to Dad.
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Piffka
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 12:29 pm
Then don't lie to Dad.
You all know how he hates that.
Is the truth so hard?
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Clary
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 01:08 pm
Is the truth so hard?
Yes, when it's followed by blows
From a heavy hand.
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Piffka
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 03:40 pm
From a heavy hand --
surprising kindness. A touch
of love, not anger.


<she says wishfully>
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fealola
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 08:34 pm
of love, not anger
my angry words spew out.
but how do you know?
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Diane
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 09:44 pm
But what do you know?
What lurks in the hearts of men?
The Shadow knows...it.
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kflux
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 10:13 pm
the shadow knows it
the dark thoughts you would say aloud
the fear of ones self
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kflux
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 10:16 pm
the shadow knows it
the dark thoughts you won't say aloud
the fear of ones self
Embarrassed
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kflux
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 11:31 pm
the fear of ones self
you let the world chain your soul
you were once wild here
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kflux
 
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Reply Wed 17 Nov, 2004 11:34 pm
you were once wild here
do not let the jealous tame you
let your soul be free
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Clary
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 04:06 am
Let your soul be free
As the bluebird soaring up
Above the dull cornfields
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willow tl
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 04:26 am
Above the dull cornfields(okay 6 syllables here :-) )
fly the ravenous blace crow
waiting to descend.
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firefly
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 04:46 am
Waiting to descend
Is the gloom of depression
On the holidays
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Clary
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 04:58 am
(apologies for the 6th syllable earlier - the phone rang! Lame excuse but true!)

On the holidays
They frolicked on Dartmoor and
Swam in the river.
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firefly
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 05:04 am
Swam in the river
Despite all the pollution
So we could cool off
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kflux
 
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Reply Thu 18 Nov, 2004 08:48 am
so we could cool off
the flames of passion consuemed us
we must part our souls
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