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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
sublime1
 
  1  
Tue 21 Sep, 2004 05:36 pm
Syllables don't count
Punctuation does not speak
It is the words job
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hey Ya
 
  1  
Wed 22 Sep, 2004 03:55 am
its is the words job.
that is what we're dealing with.
do you understand?
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Piffka
 
  1  
Wed 22 Sep, 2004 07:19 am
Do you understand?
I didn't. A head bopping
Made me see the light.
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hey Ya
 
  1  
Wed 22 Sep, 2004 08:12 am
Made me see the light.
I can now get out from dark
and find my way back.
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 22 Sep, 2004 09:00 am
And find my way back
Thanks to those trusty breadcrumbs
If birds left any
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Piffka
 
  1  
Wed 22 Sep, 2004 04:54 pm
If birds left any
seeds on their feeding stations,
chipmunks would eat well.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Wed 22 Sep, 2004 04:56 pm
Chipmunks would eat well
on sesame seeds, and bars
of granola crunch.
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Piffka
 
  1  
Wed 22 Sep, 2004 08:30 pm
Of granola crunch
I have much knowledge being
A Sixties Hippie.
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firefly
 
  1  
Tue 28 Sep, 2004 05:25 pm
A Sixties Hippie
In a fifty year old bod,
It's quite a combo
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sublime1
 
  1  
Tue 28 Sep, 2004 07:56 pm
It's quite a combo
A half pint of fresh Guiness
Then top it with Harp
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 29 Sep, 2004 10:35 am
Then top it with Harp
Listen to Irish music
And enjoy the buzz
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dixiegirl3179
 
  1  
Thu 30 Sep, 2004 01:08 am
And enjoy the buzz
Ten rounds with Jose Cuervo
And I've learned to dance
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stoplearning
 
  1  
Thu 30 Sep, 2004 01:16 am
And I've learned to dance
But I can hardly stand
My vision fades
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Thu 30 Sep, 2004 07:33 pm
hmmmmmmmm

my vision fades is 4 syllables when i say it
must be an enunciation thing


i'll leave it as it is

my vi si on fades?




My vision fades
I drift lightly toward sleep
The dogs snuggle in
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 1 Oct, 2004 08:48 am
The dogs snuggle in
Our king size bed each evening
Like pampered princes
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 1 Oct, 2004 10:17 am
Like pampered princes,
the dogs stretch and demand love.
They must be obeyed.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 1 Oct, 2004 11:01 am
They must be obeyed
Those who hold all the power
Have we any choice?
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Equus
 
  1  
Fri 1 Oct, 2004 11:04 am
Have we any choice?
If voting made a dif'rence
It would be a crime
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storm bay
 
  1  
Fri 1 Oct, 2004 01:52 pm
It would be a crime
Thus bring back memories
Distant haunts return
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larryta2
 
  1  
Fri 1 Oct, 2004 01:59 pm
Distant haunts return
Friendly ghosts this month says "Boo!"
These months fly by quick
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