please help me to correct the errors of this translation

If you wish for a commercial translation You may depost $250.00 to my pay pal account.

thanks .but i'm a student .i cant pay so much money..

Then hand your work in to your teacher and take note of his response.

Maybe on of the chinese posters here can help him? all thegt do is ask ask ask ask and never anwser anything

Or Abe could edit it for you ..., ..., ... naaaa, bad idea, scratch that.

The problem with me fixing this translation, Gugeluo, is that I'm not always sure of your intended meaning. I'll make a start but then you will have to let me know if my suggested changes match the meaning you want.

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Zhejiang, also known as New Zhongtian Holdings Group Co. Ltd, is one of the global top 500 companies in the ecological environment market. It [was] is located in Lu Jia, in Shaoxing Zhejiang Province.

The company has obvious geographic advantages, and traffic to the site is [convenient] light, making it convenient to get there. It sits adjacent to the Ningbo Port and Shanghai port, and is only 20 km away from the Xiaoshan International Airport and 10km away from the China Textile City.

Okay, now it's your turn to see if I'm being true to your meaning.

I suspect this is a piece set by the lecturer/teacher.
A "correct the translation" piece if you like.

Which is one of the reasons I am not assisting. The student needs do it himself rather than having it done for him.

I imagine interaction is difficult and time consuming for students with lower levels of comprehension so i'm inclined to forgive that aspect a little.

gugeluo we will help you but you must show you are trying to do what you can.


your question should look like this.
My teacher has given me this writing to translate. This is what i have done so far. then add your work to the post.

Here i have spaced out your work into parragraphs so that is is more easily readable. Many words together can be difficult to read.

Punctuation: periods (fulll stops) and commas are place directly after the word then a space occors before we start a new word or sentence. I want you to acknowledge that you have read and understood this in your next entery here. below i have marked in red the punctuation i find to be in the wrong place.

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Zhejiang new zhongtian Holdings Group Co. Ltd. the global top 500 in ecological environment，was located in Shaoxing Zhejiang Province, Lu Jia town.

Company has an obvious geographic advantages, and the traffic is convenient, it adjacents to the Ningbo Port and Shanghai port, 20 km away from the Xiaoshan International Airport.and 10km away from the China Textile City and it enjoys the advantaged market environment.

Company was Founded in 1979 and now bocame a trans-regional large-scale private enterprise which has an asset of nearly 30 billion yuan, more than 4,000 employees it was awarded as advanced enterprises on earning foreign exchange through export ,China's top 500 private enterprises, nationl key high-tech enterprises ,provincial key enterprises and was rated Triple A ,gold customers by financial institutions for many times.

Companies adhering to the "science and technology leads the fashion, quality maks glory, industry contributes to society" .By strengthening the upper and lower, extending the industrial chain, basing on independent innovation, carrying out scientific management, focusing on industrial upgrading, it gradually formed a industrial structure which used weaving as a center and become a leading enterprise in Shaoxing, the textile industry, the largest production base of spunlace non-woven fabric.in china .

I don't understand why it can be without "the":
Company was Founded in 1979 ...

Should it be "The Company"?

The original text has dragged you into a mess, JTT.

For example: in Shaoxing, east China of Zhejiang province.

You are correct Oristar.

I am a chinese,maybe I can help you ,but my english is not good enough.
I find your text occasionally,i think your translation is good,and there is a few mistake in it,for example:the chinese pingyin of 夏履镇 is XiaLv town.
历经30多年稳健发展 is not translated in your article.
forgive my bad english ,and if you have any quest about chinese,you can tell me.