@Stephaine Qiao,
Stephaine Qiao wrote:I am in China,and I am a freshmen in university.Thanks for your advice,I will try it!
CORRECTIONS:
I am in China and I am a freshmen in university. Thanks for your advice
; I will try it!
Avoid "run-on" sentences,
which consist of
2 complete sentences run together, as if they were only 1 sentence.
A period after "advice" will also be good, instead of the semi-colon.
David