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Reply Tue 22 Feb, 2011 02:46 am
Hello
can some body help me to correct my sentences:

1- In recent work [1,13,19], researchers have shown the importance of energy minimization and its strong correlation with power.

2- work in [11, 15] proved that although the activity in the circuit may be the same, different combinations of power values still results in different energy values.

3- Many previous works targeted the minimization of energy which corresponds to number of positive power values for worst case vector pairs.

4- In [26,28], the authors have shown that amount of power drawn from supply voltage (and sunk to ground is different depending on the energy value.

5- For example, they have shown that a positive power value on the output draws approximately five times (5x) the current from power supply compared to that sunk to ground.

6- Alternately, a negative power value would result in current sunk to ground in access of 7x when compared to that drawn from the supply.
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McTag
 
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Reply Tue 22 Feb, 2011 09:14 am
@Mary khaleel,
A few small adjustments are necessary.

My suggestions are shown underlined.

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2- work in [11, 15] proved that although the activity in the circuit may be the same, different combinations of power values still results in different energy values.

2- Work in [11, 15] proved that although the activity in the circuit may be the same, different combinations of power values still result in different energy values.
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3- Many previous works targeted the minimization of energy which corresponds to number of positive power values for worst case vector pairs.

3- Several previous studies targeted the minimization of energy which corresponds to the number of positive power values for worst case vector pairs.
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4- In [26,28], the authors have shown that amount of power drawn from supply voltage (and sunk to ground is different depending on the energy value.

Closer bracket required after "ground".
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6- Alternately, a negative power value would result in current sunk to ground in access of 7x when compared to that drawn from the supply.

6- Alternatively, a negative power value would result in current sunk to ground in excess of 7x when compared to that drawn from the supply.

Others may come up with minor variations, but I think that's okay.




Mary khaleel
 
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Reply Tue 22 Feb, 2011 03:29 pm
@McTag,
thanks for helping and I hope that you can also help me with the following sentences:

1- This means that the power plays a major role in the amount of energy consumed by the circuit , thus minimizing the number of positive power values only does not guarantee true minimum energy.

2- It can be seen from the results that power is reduced when using C-K concept when compared to the other approaches even for Y-M based ordering. For example, columns NM and HU both approaches have the same number of power (3), however, HU approach have lower power (2 for HU compared to 3 for NM approach).

3- In this work, we employed the C-K algorithm to reduce power by assigning Y bits suitable value of -1 or 1. Each Y in a vector is considered a node. Based on the initial random assignment value, all nodes associated with Y bits are placed in two partitions: 1-partition and -1-partition based on their initial fill value.

4- Algorithm HU is our implementation of filling algorithm that minimizes energy.

5- Then the newly selected vector becomes x, y is deleted from the unfilled list, and the process is repeated again.

6- In our framework, we initially randomly fill these Y bits then and reorder the input set, then we analyze these assignments for energy improvement and modify their assignments, when needed, to reduce energy.

7- Y Bits that were filled with -1 are placed in partition ‘-1’ whereas those filled with ‘1’ are placed in partition ‘1’

thanks again and I hope that you can help me with the above sentences
McTag
 
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Reply Tue 22 Feb, 2011 04:12 pm
@Mary khaleel,

I regret I am not competent to comment on technical English such as this. It is a bit too specialised for me.

I could make general points, but really you need someone who has knowledge of the subject matter. Perhaps someone will come along.

What is it anyway, mathematical analysis in electrical engineering?
Mary khaleel
 
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Reply Tue 22 Feb, 2011 04:19 pm
@McTag,
thanks for reply. if you can please can you do the same with previous sentences becaues your comments are helpful.
and regarding mathmatical analysis in electrical engineering, I think didn't mention something like that in my sentences
talk72000
 
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Reply Tue 22 Feb, 2011 04:26 pm
@Mary khaleel,
I have taken come electrical engineering courses but am not an electrical engineer. Read the following:

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Calculating power factor
As was mentioned before, the angle of this “power triangle” graphically indicates the ratio between the amount of dissipated (or consumed) power and the amount of absorbed/returned power. It also happens to be the same angle as that of the circuit's impedance in polar form. When expressed as a fraction, this ratio between true power and apparent power is called the power factor for this circuit. Because true power and apparent power form the adjacent and hypotenuse sides of a right triangle, respectively, the power factor ratio is also equal to the cosine of that phase angle. Using values from the last example circuit:



It should be noted that power factor, like all ratio measurements, is a unitless quantity.

For the purely resistive circuit, the power factor is 1 (perfect), because the reactive power equals zero. Here, the power triangle would look like a horizontal line, because the opposite (reactive power) side would have zero length.

For the purely inductive circuit, the power factor is zero, because true power equals zero. Here, the power triangle would look like a vertical line, because the adjacent (true power) side would have zero length.

The same could be said for a purely capacitive circuit. If there are no dissipative (resistive) components in the circuit, then the true power must be equal to zero, making any power in the circuit purely reactive. The power triangle for a purely capacitive circuit would again be a vertical line (pointing down instead of up as it was for the purely inductive circuit).

Power factor can be an important aspect to consider in an AC circuit, because any power factor less than 1 means that the circuit's wiring has to carry more current than what would be necessary with zero reactance in the circuit to deliver the same amount of (true) power to the resistive load. If our last example circuit had been purely resistive, we would have been able to deliver a full 169.256 watts to the load with the same 1.410 amps of current, rather than the mere 119.365 watts that it is presently dissipating with that same current quantity. The poor power factor makes for an inefficient power delivery system.

Poor power factor can be corrected, paradoxically, by adding another load to the circuit drawing an equal and opposite amount of reactive power, to cancel out the effects of the load's inductive reactance. Inductive reactance can only be canceled by capacitive reactance, so we have to add a capacitor in parallel to our example circuit as the additional load. The effect of these two opposing reactances in parallel is to bring the circuit's total impedance equal to its total resistance (to make the impedance phase angle equal, or at least closer, to zero).

Since we know that the (uncorrected) reactive power is 119.998 VAR (inductive), we need to calculate the correct capacitor size to produce the same quantity of (capacitive) reactive power. Since this capacitor will be directly in parallel with the source (of known voltage), we'll use the power formula which starts from voltage and reactance:


http://www.allaboutcircuits.com/vol_2/chpt_11/3.html

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Power_factor
Mary khaleel
 
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Reply Tue 22 Feb, 2011 04:55 pm
@talk72000,
thanks for these infromation but I just want to correct grammar mistakes in the sentnces I know that there are wrong information in these sentences from engineering persepctive but I want only to correct english grammar
thanks
talk72000
 
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Reply Tue 22 Feb, 2011 05:10 pm
@Mary khaleel,
There are terms in your example that requires engineering knowledge. Explain C-K Concept and Hu concept and are those columns part of a chart? English is not separated from subject matter. at least then provide sources that explain those C-K, HU and those columns.
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