Edit it please (make it sound native English)

A hundred people will give you 100 different answers, but here goes:



You have a silver tongue. But really, Mary is an attractive woman, who can look really beautiful at times, but at other times quite ordinary, or even ugly.

ORIGINAL: Aha, so you're good at flattering and fawning. Honestly speaking, Mary is only a little beautiful woman. She looks pretty in one way, but looks mediocre even ugly in another.

REVISED: Aha, so you're good at flattering and fawning. Honestly speaking, Mary is only a little beautiful. She looks pretty in one way, but looks mediocre, even ugly in another.

Original: Edit it please (make it sound native English) Not native

Edit it please (make it sound native) Okay

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Edit it please (make it sound like native English)

Thank you both.

Initially I did write as "make it sound native". I felt it was "ambiguous", so I added "English" there.

Thank you.