Well nobody is perfect right out of the gate.
I thought you did a very good job!
To me it was just very melancholy. Lonely.
But I adore melancholy and lonely is one of my favorite things. Those are two things I'm really very good at. (I'm not kidding.)
I thought the music choice was lovely and appropriate.
You're already 20 steps ahead of me so Go! Dog! Go! and maybe I'll try to catch up to you.